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inuyashacooks

hetalia ficlets || the fix;

Nov 03, 2009 06:44

oh-ho, and look who sed they would never write sex? well, i have. it's not really explicit and it's not really about sex in particular, just i guess whatever i could get from the dregs of the thing.

title: Islero
pairing: Spain x Romano
rating: PG-16
summary: Fighting off shadows with momentary bright; Romano and his worries.

( Romano listened as Spain hummed some far-off song; something inside him shifted in irritation. )

wtf

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tokene November 3 2009, 13:25:26 UTC

So much sex. Not that I'm complaining though.

I really like the very calm, almost poetic pace you set in all of these. It's a very different take on things, an refreshing to say the least. There isn't very much dialogue either, but the mood and connection between the characters come through very nicely :D Good job. Your works always are great, heh.

inuyashacooks November 3 2009, 13:30:45 UTC

yes, i was like "what should i write that i don't write that much? O RIGHT SEX." XDD

thankyou!! :D the thing i was worried about was that i don't really lean toward writing anything hardcore, and therefore i wouldn't come across well, but i'm glad to hear it's alright 8D

tokene November 3 2009, 13:32:26 UTC

/snerks
Smut looks like fun. I haven't popped the metaphorical cherry yet, but I hope I do decently when the time comes~

Who says that sex has to be hardcore to be enjoyable? 8D
... That didn't come out right.

inuyashacooks November 3 2009, 13:43:06 UTC

to be honest, smut scares me D; i probably couldn't write anything beyond these very vague descriptions XD but i smut's fun to read, so when you pop that metaphorical cherry, i shall be there :P

oho, is that an invitation? /makes it sound even wronger

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madnesshp November 3 2009, 14:20:35 UTC

Oooh, very nice ♥ ! I like the soft subtlety of the sex in these pieces. While not hardcore, it's still very clear what's going on, and it's refreshing! Particularly, I loved the Spain/Romano piece, because of the religious elements in the background and how Romano chooses the darkness over it (while Spain remains happily oblivious). :DD

inuyashacooks November 3 2009, 15:54:36 UTC

:D! glad you liked :D actually, yeah, the spain/romano one was actually my favorite as well. thanks very much!

historyblitz November 3 2009, 16:14:05 UTC

I always appreciate people who can write England and America together with a solid grasp of how their characters connect emotionally and physically.

What you have about them isn't explicit--but it doesn't need to be. You can feel everything through the use of sounds and light.

inuyashacooks November 4 2009, 08:04:53 UTC

:D thank you! yeah i think the connection between characters without using dialogue is really important, so i'm glad you liked that bit of it.

tupelo_thief November 3 2009, 20:54:52 UTC

OH HO HO WHAT IS THIS I SEE!? VAGUELY SMEXY TIEMS XDDDDDDD! LOVE IT. SPLENDID. dude, you write everyone so well :D. and O.M.F.G swing low, sweet cadillac is like SUCH a good title for usxuk even tho i dun know the song lol put it on a CD for me sometime. and spamano :3!! i like the title for that, whats it mean? and japan, YES he's a bit of a screamer too. he's a freak that one XD.

inuyashacooks November 4 2009, 08:09:15 UTC

NO U. lolololol "vaguely smexy XD japan is a freak XD lady in public, freak in private just like austria.

islero was the name of the bull who killed manolete. oh and swing low, sweet cadillac- that's such and awesome fucking song!!! the part at the beginning is two of the guys shouting back and forth to each other, hawk-and-repeat style, almost, and then the guy with the deeper voice goes, "yo mam-bo.........and ya papa too." XD it's i guess based on that old spiritual song swing low, sweet chariot, cadillac being an obvious part of the meaning to it.

i'll put that on a cd in addition to all this AWESOME lil wayne music my brother downloaded. like so awesome i was listening to it on repeat all this morning and i almost exploded. true story. it wont be another epic cd like atomic-electric tho XD

sorry i dint reply to your text earlier. D: sleeping, like usual.

tupelo_thief November 4 2009, 22:49:17 UTC

ORLY? OH GAWD I WANT TO GO TO A BULL FIGHT T________T. miseries aside, i've heard swing low, sweet chariot b4, but never swing low, sweet cadillac but OMFG that sounds so funneh XD

MOTHA FUCKIN LIL WAYNE YO *thumbz up*.

inuyashacooks November 5 2009, 14:16:50 UTC

u a stanky ho

h to the izzo, v to the izzay, not guilty ya'll got t feel me...

karorumetallium November 3 2009, 22:00:47 UTC

FFFFFFFFFFFFFF I LOVED THIS.

The US x UK was my favorite, though. My favorite pairing and I loved it... I could almost feel it; very, very good.

inuyashacooks November 4 2009, 08:09:53 UTC

8DDD! glad you liked :D thanks for reading!