hetalia oneshots || some kinds of night;

Aug 16, 2009 16:57

both these fics kind of started as something and ended up as something else :|

title: Promise
pairing: America X Japan
rating: PG?
summary: On an empty midnight street Japan feels full the rush of America's bright eyes.

Promise )

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darkheart510 August 16 2009, 22:22:58 UTC
Ohhhh, that was pretty.

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inuyashacooks August 16 2009, 22:28:45 UTC
aha, thank you ;D not sure which one you're talkin bout but i accept the compliment anyway >D *shot*

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darkheart510 August 16 2009, 22:47:50 UTC
Oh, hahaha. I'm a dumbass. The SpainxRomano one. I loved the quiet imagery. There's something nostalgic about falling asleep during a car ride home.

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inuyashacooks August 16 2009, 23:37:18 UTC
XDD nah, no prob. "There's something nostalgic about falling asleep during a car ride home." <- that hits the nail right on the head :D

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stalkerbunny August 16 2009, 22:57:56 UTC
Just read the Spain/Romano story, and...eeh ♥
The description is so lovely, all slow and sudden in turns...suits the setting rather pefectly.

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inuyashacooks August 16 2009, 23:34:40 UTC
ahh thanks :3 glad you enjoyed ;D

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min19 August 16 2009, 23:02:14 UTC
Waaaahhhh, I may be biased since it's totally my OTP, but the SpainRomano one was written very well. It was amusing but somehow very lightly sweet, and I loved all the emotions portrayed through the simplest of words and actions. I could imagine the entire sequence of events in my head, what each character was thinking and feeling throughout. :D

Nice work!! Hope to see more &hearts

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inuyashacooks August 16 2009, 23:35:54 UTC
wow, thanks so much :DDD i really appreciate it :D and i'm really glad you liked!

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zeenzazada August 16 2009, 23:24:44 UTC
I love how Romano is just to adorably drunk! XD great job on it, I envy your writing skills.

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inuyashacooks August 16 2009, 23:36:25 UTC
he strikes me as an amusing sort of drunk XDD thanks, hehe- glad ya liked :3

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munesanzun_koi August 17 2009, 00:30:09 UTC
How lovely♪

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inuyashacooks August 17 2009, 05:40:56 UTC
heh :3 thankya!

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