[Fanfic]

Sep 09, 2010 01:33

Hi, new here to the community (and to LJ overall) but here's something I wrote, you've probably read hundreds of these by now so I'm bassically spamming in a way ( Read more... )

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liketosing_a September 9 2010, 10:59:15 UTC
Daww that was great! The history behind this pair has always been one of my favourites. And the bit at the end with Canada ;__;

There were a couple of typos though but other than that it's a very well written story!

Good thing I decided to check the comm for updates xD

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inuyoukai_san September 10 2010, 21:06:52 UTC
Thank you for your comment!! Seriously some typos??? (goddangit!)

Yeah, I thought that was the best place to end, I had written originally more but it was weird and stupid, and redundant...So yeah that was scratched off! XD

Thank you so very much~ I'm going to go check over those typos~ (Must eliminate-!!!)

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ninjamatty September 11 2010, 03:30:34 UTC
Aww that was so cute! <3

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inuyoukai_san September 11 2010, 18:08:03 UTC
Thank you~ *3*

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ninjamatty September 19 2010, 02:31:35 UTC
Since I'm French-Canadian, I hope you won't mind me correcting your French XD''

You wrote: “Je vais t’en chrisse un si tu ne réveilles pas! D’estie de salaud!" but it should be '' Je vais t'en crisser une si tu te réveilles pas, esti de salaud!''

Also note that this sentence totally made me laugh XD

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inuyoukai_san September 19 2010, 15:27:40 UTC
Im technically french canadian as well, but my frenc is a flop so thanks so much for the correction!

I'm happy it made you laugh. :D

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Awesome~! yukai_yami March 19 2011, 14:00:20 UTC
Uwa~~! I liked it so much~! XD
I totally loveNethCan fanfics(even if it's not my otp), and I really liked this one!
Poor Mattie...always being forgoteen... ;A;...but I'm sure Lars remebers him~ He has to with all those massive groups of Tulips he sends to Canada each year as thanks for the war XD!
Nice job with this fanfiction!! \(>w<)/

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