you're under his skin - junes standalone

[invincible_jess]

title: you’re under his skin
part: 1/1
rating: 12+
pairing: JuddJones
warning: slight swearing.
disclaimer: just a story from my overactive imagination.

and: the first part was a dream, before i got a little carried away, hehe.

Comments

[kapoosh_kapow]

wow. just, wow.
that was so descriptive and emotional.
i loved it
:)

[invincible_jess]

:)
and thankyou very much!
that's kinda the way i was hoping it'd be taken.
(: thankyou again. <3

[x_fatefellshort]

i love how there is minimal dialogue and there is so much that it unspoken. i love that, the idea that their bond is so much deeper and understandable by a touch or a look. i love how everything is just so easily understood between them, like they are so comfortable in their relationship and with each other they dont need words, they're happy with the silence (and personally, that whole silence with the ones you love thing makes me melt, because i can relate so much to it). and i love you, for being so amazing and being such an epic writer.

[invincible_jess]

well i suppose that it just goes to show that nobody can not fight, and that even without the words things are still being yelled across the room - and yeah, whewt :P
and gosh, you flatter me too much you strange little girl. hehe.
oh! and don't melt. i think i like you better as a solid, lmao.

[stargirl82]

wow, there's so much pain and love i can hardly take it.
i understand why fighting's necessary sometimes but i usually shy away from confrontation because this is exactly what happens to me when fighting with someone i love. i feel like i can't breathe, i feel like i'm gonna die when they leave and you have described it so perfectly. <3

however, they're stronger than this, they love each other and so this ending is somewhat... positive. i'm glad that danny doesn't want to make promises he may not be able to keep though. <3

[invincible_jess]

oh thankyou so much! and i agree completely - it depends on who i'm fighting with to whether or not i get that dread feeling where your lungs collapse on themselves, and it's horrible. but you get through. (:

and yes i don't like people making promises they possibly can't keep, it's a little pointless, however sentimental. :P

thanks so much for reading! <3

[invincible_jess]

oh thanks so much! well i was going to say i'm glad you stoped breathing, but i meant it in a nicer way than it sounds :P
and just yeah. thankyou so much!

[dijian_kwaii]

That was just beautiful, every word had me near tears! Emotional and very soft, loved it :)

[invincible_jess]

oh thankyou so much!
<3 glad you liked it.
(: