War and Peace and Vampires -- Chapter 04

[invisiblehabits]

Title: War and Peace and Vampires
Chapter: 04/??
Author: invisiblehabits
Beta: tingedwords
Genre: AU/Angst/Romance
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Malexmale sex, Blood, violence
Pairings: Tora/Hiroto, Aki/Kenzo
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: Someone was leaning against the wall, someone tall and dark that seemed

Comments

[invisiblehabits]

It does make sense! And it makes me happy! I didn't want them to be all perfect the first time around, it's bad enough they fitted (do forgive the wording, please!) in every way imaginable, giving each other perfect pleasure and whatnot. Something had to be off! Haha, sorry Tora but that ended up being you! I'm glad you approve of how it went, hun!

Don't even ask me where that line came from! It wrote itself, for real! As did the Romeo and Juliette one, they both surprised me. In very different ways... Aki and Kenzo are really interesting to write about in here actually, but something tells me you are right about the information regarding Pon...

[invisiblehabits]

Haha, really? Who are your favourites then? And little Hiropon is sexy no matter what he is I'd say. Though, of course, vampires hold an awful lot of sex appeal... XD

Thank you! I'll try my best!

[velvet_liquor]

I think I could have died while reading the Tora x Hiroto scene... ♥ It was... hot, intense... The contrast between Tora's cold skin and Hiroto's hot one was thrilling... ♥ I definitely want to know what's gonna happen next *w*

Regarding Aki and Kenzo... It seems like their relationship is more complicated than I thought... I guess there are going to be some flashbacks soon~ \o\

Go back to writing darling ♥ *takes the whip out and grins*

♥♥♥

[invisiblehabits]

Hehehe, I told you you'd like this chapter hun! I think both Tora and Hiroto would agree about their skins though, they clash beautifully! This is where all the fun, and troubles, begin hehe.

Aki and Zo are a lot more complicated than you'd think! I really love writing about them and I just hope I can get down what I want in regards to them.

Now don't you go whipping me into work here, young lady! Or else I will....I will.... *goes back to Word*

♥♥♥

[invisiblehabits]

Stupidly hot, I swear I just adore that wording

[invisiblehabits]

Tora is always on top, in every sense of the word, isn't he? Zo better hope he never finds out about that conversation or there will be hell to pay for sure. But for once I don't think Kenzo cares, he wasn't thinking about himself when he shared that information.

[anselik]

I absolutely love the contrast between the two pairings. One hot and impatient and the other bitter-sweet longing. They both just equal desire. Hope this made sense 8D

Seriously, why can't Romeo just have his Juliet? D;
I like the way you created the Hiroto part. I just duuno if Tora has the guts to turn him right away(he probably does and I am just being a hopeless romantic). I will just have to wait for the next part.

Thank you for writing!

[invisiblehabits]

It does make sense! And I kind of love you for analysing it like this, haha. The two pairings are very alike yet opposites, just like you say. I'm glad I got it across. ^^

Maybe this time Romeo can have his Romeo? Possibly... With a lot of luck...

Tora lost control, it's as simple as that. Hiroto tears down every ounce of composure he's gathered over his years, it's rather intriguing actually. We'll see how you like the future, I hope it'll sit well with you.

Thank you for reading and commenting!