Strumming heartstrings -- Drabble

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Strumming heartstrings
Chapter: Drabble
Author: invisiblehabits
Genre: Dispirited fluff (I say it’s a genre, so stfu)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Implications of malexmale sex
Pairings: Tora/Hiroto, past Hiroto/Nao
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: “Do you miss it?” he asked, somewhat worried

Comments

[velvet_liquor]

That's sweet~ =D and Hiroto should know, he won't be able to top Tora; not possible... XD

So this one is 600 words? I'm amazed, that's kind of a challenge, writing with a determined number of words xD

And I LOOOOOOVE how you spoil us with stories *o* I'm fucking glad you're back to writing more or less regularly, or at least, I enjoy the time it will last~ \o/ ♥ I hope your muses will stay right here, with you, telling you things and inspiring you beautiful stories~ ♥

[invisiblehabits]

Yup, not counting the title and comments and whatnot, this is precisely 600 words! It was a fun challenge really! And so I figured I should share, since I kinda like spoiling you now that my muses are co-operating! Just you wait till they get stuck on a long and complicated plotline again, one that cannot be written out in the amount of a day, and I'll be right back to taking forever again. :P

Pon can top Tora though! Both physically, it is quite hot to read that actually, but especially being a dominant bottom. Hehe.

[velvet_liquor]

Well, if we're stuck on a complicated plotline, maybe we could try something together xD it seems like it works for Suzy and Chriss, so who knows... xD with both of our minds, maybe we could find a wonderful plotline xD

Hiroto being a dominant bottom, I can perfectly imagine :p Tora seems like the type of guy to be easily dominated when in love~ but a hot fic when Tora is a bottom...? xD Hmmm... That's still hotter when Tora is on top xD

[invisiblehabits]

We can definitely discuss and muse at least! I am always open to that! <3

Oh you! It is so HOT to read Tora as a bottom! Haha, at least when it is written well! *snickers* beyondtheremix had a fucking fantabulous bottom!Tora story! For example!

[invisiblehabits]

Even a tiny bit of ToraPon this time!! <3

[invisiblehabits]

That is so true!! Silly Tora, hopefully little Pon will realise that too. Perhaps he'll dare to take more control the further the relationship goes on. ^^

Hehe, and normally tigers have the claws, but this time the tiger got scratched! :D

[siseja]

awwww!!! ^^
*jumps in bed and cuddles up with them too*

...
*ish kicked out*
;___;

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anyway I really loved this piece ^^
though imagining Hiroto top is just... impossible
he's always and will forever be uke =w= even with nao
I'm happy you didn't mess with my head completely and made Tora seem like he'd ACTUALLY bottom for Pon like some people sometimes do @_@
sooo yeah
it's realistic
Pon can't always have everything
and he's lucky to be taken care of like that ^^

[invisiblehabits]

Hahaha! Not sure I would want to disrupt Kenzo right now, lololol. Not safe to do so unless you are Aki, barely even then!

Hehehe, but Tora bottoming to Pon is hot! When done well I promise you it is! I like unexpected flips in pairings like that; Pon topping Tora, Uruha topping Ruki (actually my all time GazettE OTP right there), and the like. I should try to write it more...

Glad you like the story though! Here Tora is definitely top, and you are very right when you say one cannot always have everything, even if you want it. ^^

[siseja]

....of course Uruha tops Ruki ._. Ruki doesn't top much

and where did Aki and Kenzo get into the picture? xD I was sneaking into ToraPon's bed :3
*settles for curling up in the foot end of the bed instead*

[invisiblehabits]

You'd be surprised how often you see Ruki as a top... And Uruha is almost always a bottom and a hardcore one to that! Uruha is a calm, controlled top who deals perfectly with Ruki's dominant bottom manners. Yes yes, that is how my universe looks. Hehe.

Hahaha! Right! Sorry, I was reading through Aki Kenzo stuff just before that comment reply, my mind was sort of stuck on that. WRONG STORY YO! XD

[invisiblehabits]

Haha, well it had to end there! Go count if you wish, there's EXACTLY 600 words, and 600 was the limit. LOL! I had fun and random scenes are good, you can create your own continuations! :D

Yes, Tora is so often the sadist dealing pain...it was kinda fun allowing him to be the recipient for once. And not minding, hehe. Glad you liked it dear!!

[magnuminium]

I can understand Tora, but I can understand Pon even more. I don't doubt Pon would continue to be happy with him, but Tora should at least try. This is kind of sad, not tragic or pathetic but just sad.

[invisiblehabits]

This is very weird, at the same time sweet and sad. Bittersweet perhaps? Tora might try, perhaps, maybe, in time, but not now, not yet. It's too foreign for him, unfortunately for Pon.