Styx -- Oneshot

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Styx
Chapter: Oneshot
Author: invisiblehabits
Beta: musicalmimicry
Genre: AU/Abstract
Rating: PG
Warnings: -
Pairings: Aki/Kenzo
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: “I’m...” Brows furrowed as he tried to remember, not very surprised when it was hard to do so. “Aki, I think my name is Aki.”
Comments: Okay,

Comments

[musicalmimicry]

You are very welcome, love! I LOVE it, but you know that! And I WILL write you a companion piece <3

I think we've already discussed this half to death and my random notes pointed out my favorite parts but just... know that i love this.

I know you felt like it is sort of plotless in a way, but I don't think it is at all. There's a point and a meaning in this but it's not hidden away in a complex plot but rather in the descriptions, the imagery and the very concept of the place in which they ARE. It's about being, existing, together, regardless of time and space, with the physical boundaries gone and the memories of the physical life faint and fleeting. And yet still, in this undefined space they exist, just the two of them <3 I love it! It's beautiful. <3

Be proud of this one, cupcakes!

- Aki

[invisiblehabits]

Aaaw! Thank you hun! You made me believe in this, and continue not to mention finish it! It's strange and odd and yes, I did feel like it was both plotless and pointless at times. But...in the end I'm rather proud of it, because it's so very different from what I normally write and it's always good to challenge yourself, right?

♥

[gingersteps]

Oh, I do potter about from time to time and dabble around in the ponds and leeways of the odd creative flush, but this - my darling - this is just spectacular.

You have created, for me, a pop up card, containing a scene so beautiful I am enchanted and cannot look away.

I am rather fond of detached worlds and fully believe the that nations inside our imaginations should be fully exploited and so seeing this rather beautiful snapshot of your river styx is just wonderful. You have successfully written loss, pain, death and emptiness all in something beautiful and loving. That takes skill.

Thank you for letting me unfold your little enchanted world. I shall hide it under my pillow and gaze upon it when i cannot sleep.

[invisiblehabits]

You have no idea how proud this comment made me feel! There were so many times along the way I almost put this story aside and left the boys hanging, because I simply had no idea what I was doing. But...yes, in the end I can admit it was actually a rather fun way to discover something new within my own mind, definitely a challenge but one I conquered.

You are most most welcome dear! And if you want to walk with them along endless pathways and forever changing scenery, then be my guest. They might not talk much, but I believe they'd appreciate the company.

[gingersteps]

You damn well should feel proud, writing these kinds of things with such confidence is fantastic. I don't care if you felt like you didn't know what was going on at any one point, in such a blank canvas of a world, of course you wandered into parts you hadn't sketched yet.

I think I'd feel at home in this world.

[invisiblehabits]

dsl'övmjdc *loves* That's about how coherent I feel right now! You praise me too much, but thank you, I'll bow down and greedily accept it all.

Just please don't forget yourself in there, it would be such a pity and a waste. If you'd accept it I would love to get to know you better and then you cannot forget who you are, can you?

[velvet_liquor]

This one was intriguing, disturbing (in a good way), and I was very lost at the beginning. At first, I thought it was a dream and that they would wake up, but it doesn't seem like it *smiles* I guess it's up to us to guess, and in a way, we don't even have to guess, because they're together, and they don't need anything else =] ♥
So, this comment doesn't seem to make sense xD but... *sighs* I liked what you wrote, once more~ =]

And now I'll try write, hoping reading this will kick my muses into helping me write xD

[velvet_liquor]

And I forgot to ask: could you link me to these Kenzo pictures, please? I've searched through jrock_scans, but this is getting difficult to find something in there xD
♥ =]

[invisiblehabits]

Uhm...I'll ask koboshi_ichigo about it and pass the link on to you. I believe she might've scanned them herself.

[velvet_liquor]

Okay~ ^^ Thank you ♥

[shadow_fictions]

This is beautiful. Actually spell-bindingly beautiful. Dgycdsefhikn. Your writing is so pretty ♥

[invisiblehabits]

Wow, thank you!! This is rather different from my usual writing, or at least I think it is, but it turned out quite well in the end. I'm glad you like it! ♥

[invisiblehabits]

Yay! I'm glad you like this mess of a story that in the end I quite like. Reading it through once I no longer have to write on it, it seems rather good... LOL! My mind managed to confuse itself terribly with this piece though.

Yes, butterflies! One splash of colour, and just maybe hope... ♥