Shoot Out -- Oneshot

Oct 22, 2011 20:29

Title: Shoot Out
Chapters: Oneshot
Author: invisiblehabits
Beta: musicalmimicry
Genre: PWP, basically
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Porn and not much else than the crazy mind of a girl in fangirl mode!
Pairing: Aki/Kenzo /Hiroto
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money, unless you feel like paying me to read. (Which would be really nice right now I tell you)
Summary: It’ ( Read more... )

sid, alice nine, hiroto/aki/kenzo, ayabie

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invisiblehabits October 22 2011, 21:17:18 UTC
Hahaha! Well I got a request, more or less, from musicalmimicry and so this had to be written, because there is no way I could ever deny her anything.

Glad you like it sugar! <333

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magnuminium October 23 2011, 14:27:50 UTC
Whoa! Cocky Pon! I like it. Show them who's sexy Pon! And I like it how he decided to go with the role they put him into. Especially the way he talked to Kenzo and that blocking hand was pure win!

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invisiblehabits November 6 2011, 19:56:00 UTC
Eh....I have no idea why I have not responded to this comment earlier! I am so sorry!!

Cocky Pon is win! He has proven himself cocky lately, hehehe. Why not in bed as well? ;)

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xkokorokirax November 15 2011, 02:13:21 UTC
Hi ( ... )

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invisiblehabits November 19 2011, 16:12:26 UTC
I swear I've been staring at this comment for the past days, completely in awe of your praise and feeling even more unequipped on as to how to reply to this! Thank you so much!! It seems like a proper beginning, at least.

Really, thank you, reading this comment made me so happy and so proud! Cold Feet is an absolutely horrible story, I cried writing it even, haha! I've been told I write tragedy well, and somehow Cold Feet seems like the peak of tragedy! :P

Broken Bonds and Healing Balms, I like that one. It grew a lot deeper than I intended it to be at first. The concept of it is terrifying, especially since I know people who are into pain the same way Aki is in that story.

And Beat... Many times I wonder if I outdid myself way too early on with that story, haha. It seems to be everyone's favourites, and I cannot disagree. Beat was the first story in a very long time I felt truly proud of having written. It's wrong in so many ways, so painful and so many wrongs that maybe, just maybe, they can make a right at the end. I honestly ( ... )

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xkokorokirax November 20 2011, 00:26:56 UTC
I'm so happy you replied to my comment ( ... )

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invisiblehabits December 1 2011, 15:54:26 UTC
Do forgive me for taking forever to reply to this! And of course I do reply! You take the time to tell me how much you appreciate my writing, it would be so rude of me to ignore that ( ... )

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velvet_liquor November 19 2011, 18:07:08 UTC
Yummy, yummy, yummy!!! ♥♥♥
Should've read this a loooot sooner, but I'm slow like that~ And, yeah, I loved it~
*whispers* deep throat FTW~ *

I like that older version of Pon~ 8D seems like their night is gonna be a blur of pleasure~ ♥

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invisiblehabits November 19 2011, 18:31:38 UTC
Hehehe, well you read it now! And yes, deep throating is a bit too yummy in fanfic to be true! Somehow we all agree Aki does it better than anyone else... Poor boy, what a slut we've turned him into. XD

Grown up Pon is so much fun! I should use him more often... ♥

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velvet_liquor November 19 2011, 18:37:57 UTC
Somehow, thinking of Aki deep throating while being unshaved is quite.... not as sexy... XDD

Oh yes yes yes, do that ♥

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invisiblehabits November 19 2011, 19:27:23 UTC
LOL! Now you're just being picky hun! XD

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