De-reflect -- drabble

[invisiblehabits]

Title: De-reflect
Chapter: Drabble
Author: invisiblehabits
Beta: tingedwords
Rating: PG-13 (for implications)
Warnings: Implications of past horrors, mentions of malexmale sex
Pairings: Tora/Hiroto
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: A relationship, a proper one with more than just shared drinks and really

Comments

[eimininja]

This was awesome. I reeaaaally want to know what Hiroto's secret is, you've wrote the perfect cliffhanger there. And it is all so sweet, it is obvious that Tora loves Hiroto very much.

[invisiblehabits]

Drabbles are good like that, they allow you to continue the story on your own. ^^

I'd say Tora definitely likes Hiroto a lot, and could easily fall in love with him. But I'm not sure he loves him where they're at right now, cause I think Tora would be aware of the fact Hiroto are keeping himself distant. If that makes sense.

[sciencesaves]

This was simply perfect.
A lovely little oneshot that gave just enough information to let readers run wild with speculation.
I really loved the way the emphasis moved back and forth between Tora and Hiroto. Again, helped to bring to attention what wasn't being said.
I have absolutely no problem with the length of this fic. (笑) I'm rather partial to short pieces, myself. <3
xoxo

[invisiblehabits]

Aaw! Thank you! I'm glad you approve of the length of it, as well as the lack of information. Sometimes you don't need all the answers, ne?

I am despicably bad at short. I have a work in progress that was supposed to be a short oneshot. It is now 30000+ words and MAYBE halfway done, if I'm lucky...

But yes, I'm very happy you like this one! <3

[invisiblehabits]

You did! And I enjoyed reading that. I would also really love to discuss it with you some day, learn what you think happened to our poor little squirrel. Let's just hope that he allows Tora to help him deal with everythng he went through...

I liked writing for you! You should indeed yell at me more often! It is clearly effective! :D

[velvet_liquor]

After reading also the comments, I gather I'm not gonna know what happened to Pon... T_T Will the puppy eyes work on you? *w*

And I'm not sure if the story is sad or incredibly cute... Probably a bit of both (as always ♥)... Hiroto shouldn't be sad like that... He should be smiling, and loved... Oh yes, loved T_T Tora is there for that, after all.. But still, Pon keeping Tora at arm's lenght is almost painful to read... é_è though I'm glad Tora decided to take the matters into his own hands. Though, will Pon share his burden? I guess we'll never know...
And I'd love to know.... *whines*

[invisiblehabits]

I am dreadfully sorry this reply has taken forever darling! No, it seems unlikely there will ever be more to this tale. I have too many other things on my plate!

However, I have a feeling Tora is persistent and insistent enough to make Pon speak, and that Pon just might trust him enough to eventually open up about what happened to him. So that Tora can help him heal and move on, because Pon does deserve to be loved, so very very much.