Closet Child -- Oneshot

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Closet Child
Chapters: Oneshot
Author: invisiblehabits
Beta: musicalmimicry
Genre: Drama
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Very mild language
Pairing: Aki/Kenzo
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money, unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: The kitchen had gone dead silent at her words, not even the eerie sound of a dripping tap like there always was in

Comments

[eimininja]

Oh this was so cute, I love Naoto and this whole relationship and story, it is so sweet ^-^ I can't wait for your fourth bit

[invisiblehabits]

Yay! So glad you like her too, she's a kickass kid if you ask me. I do feel like writing more with her, but it tends to take me forever to write stuff lately so who knows... It's in the planning though! ^^

[westcaterwaul]

LOVE IT.

Thank you for continuing the story. They are all truly adorable. Such a cute family.

[invisiblehabits]

Thank you! They are an awfully cute family, I don't even know how that happened. But I like writing about them, all of them, togeher and so there'll probably be more at some point. Glad you like it dear. ^^

[velvet_liquor]

I do want a daughter like Naoto, too~ ♥ *squeals* she is absolutely loveable, and I'd spend all day hugging her *w* she is the cutest, smartest thing ever ♥ and all the little details she's picked up on Aki and Kenzo make her all the more loveable ♥

And I do want a fourth story with her, yup! *nods to herself*

[invisiblehabits]

Hahaha! I believe at some point she'd freak out over all the cuddles and kick and bite her way out of there to go do something fun -- true Kenzo style! Cause like you say, she has picked up some traits from them over the years. My main concern is that I put too much of Aki and Kenzo into her, but then we don't really know what her mother is like so I think it's alright.

Fingers crossed then, haha. I like writing about her, so there's a good chance there'll be more. <3

[ruksugi]

This is one of those cases where kids say the darnedest things.While it was kind of serious, it had its hilarious moments where you could see the influence that the two men have on Naoto. Ten is about the age that most kids start really notices there surroundings.

Thanks for the read!

[invisiblehabits]

Yup! Kids are kids and they'll say the most inappropriate things sometimes, both in their wording and when they choose to say something. It's kind of amusing to try and write it, to be honest.

Ten might be a little old, she's been declared clever many times over, but it's not too old so it works.

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it.

[xkokorokirax]

It has been years since the last time I left a comment here, I was studying for my exams, sorry TT^TT But now I'm free again XD
I liked this story a lot, Naoto is so cute and I definitely want to see her again in another fic ♥ I don't think she would have realized she was Aki's daughter being eight, at least I didn't think about such things XDDDD You take for granted that your father is your father, that's my opinion XD Anyway, I hope I can read more from you soon

[invisiblehabits]

Aaaw, don't worry dear! It has been months since I posted anything worth while so... I hope your exams went well! :D

Naoto is adorable, if I'm allowed to say that about my own character. And while I agree that you take for granted your father is your father, kids also tend to question things. Naoto is a clever girl, that much has been established, and I think in many ways she would've questioned why Aki wanted her to come stay there earlier. But yeah, it works this way so it'll stay like this. ^^

I hope you can read more from me soon too, LOL! I just need to get myself back into geer and actually writing! :P