aroma -- chapter 07

[invisiblehabits]

Title: Aroma
Chapters: 07/07
Author: invisiblehabits
Genre: Angst/Romance
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Malexmale sex, abuse, character death, violence, murder, fluff
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto, Saga/Shou
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money, unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: “Don’t say another word Tora,” he demanded and looked at the

Comments

[rave_andou]

T_______T That was such a bitter sweet ending. It still made me cry again. It was so nicely written and it was good that at least Saga and Shou got a happy ending. Saaa it was so good!

[invisiblehabits]

It is bittersweet and sad and probably even a tiny bit horrible, if you ask me. But...I don't know, in my mind a happy ending didn't fit. There was too much pain and hurt and grief and sadness to make room for happiness... At least for Tora. Saga and Shou had each other still and I always knew the two of them would have their happy ever after. Call it a small retribution for killing Hiroto and crushing Tora.

I'm glad you liked the ending and the story at large, sorry I made you cry yet again and THANK YOU for reading and commenting! ^^

[invisiblehabits]

You made the beautiful, beautiful banner of darling dead Hiroto! Thank you for that! :D

I'm very happy you like the story, even if you do suck at commenting! Haha, jk! XD

[invisiblehabits]

Aaw, Chriss! I do know what you mean, don't worry! I'm glad you said those exact words; you cannot fix death! That's exactly what I had in mind when finishing this chapter. I believe a lot of people wanted to see Tora fixed, but there's no way to fix him because the person he needs to be fixed can never return. Perhaps if I had been willing to write a monster story spanning over a lifetime I could've figured out a way to make him semi-alright, but I just thought that somehow....this was better. It fits, sadly enough.

I'm glad you liked the details of the story too. I tried to make the characters different and make them react differently to the same events, if I managed to do that then I'm extremely pleased!

Thank you for reading this. And commenting. I'm very happy you liked it and that you think the ending was fit for the story. It's sad and unhappy, empty and hopeless no doubt. But....I just think that's the way it had to be. Unfortunately... Thank you hun, really!

[invisiblehabits]

Wow... Where did you find these lines? They're gorgeous. In their own twisted morbid way...

I think Tora would agree with the first two lines especially.

[roses_areblue]

I realy love this fic. Almost make me cry again. I don't realy like the ending because i wish happyness for Tora in the end. But for some reason, the ending is some kind of closure for me (and also Tora) and it makes me fell relieve. You are a very good writer. Keep on writing and good luck.

[invisiblehabits]

Thank you! I know, the ending is really sad and I wish I could've given Tora a happy ending but....there really is no way to do that. He lost the most important thing he had, the only one he wanted. Hiroto can't come back and in the end killing the man who took his lover away made Tora feel better. He doesn't regret it, he never will regret it even if he never gets out of prison. In a way it is, as you said, closure for him. He knows that when he failed to protect Hiroto in the first place, he could do something to punish the man who took Hiroto's life. Then it doesn't matter what happens to Tora himself, because the way he sees it his life is over either way...

I will keep writing, no doubt! Thank you so much for you support throughout this, it has meant more than I can ever tell you.

[roses_areblue]

I read it again today. My heart break everytime i read this but i read it anyway. I am going to say this again.... you are a very good writer and i am happy that a lot of people loves it too.

[invisiblehabits]

Thank you! I'm honoured you took the time to read it again! You really are too kind. :D

[invisiblehabits]

Haha, I love you too! And your spamming. XD