War and Peace and Vampires -- Chapter 01

[invisiblehabits]

Title: War and Peace and Vampires
Chapter: 01/??
Author: invisiblehabits
Beta: tingedwords
Genre: AU/Angst/Romance
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Blood, violence
Pairings: Tora/Hiroto, Aki/Kenzo
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: Why was he explaining himself to a complete stranger? Why did he so desperately try to

Comments

[redroses1791]

whee! a new story to read :3 <3

dunno whyyyyy but i loved this :

Being subjected to the seduction of tall dark strangers might sound good in fiction, but it was surprising scary when happening in real life.

dfkl;asfjd exactly!? ^^;

fail comment is full of fail. but! i guess feedback is feedback to let you know i'm reading XD <3

[invisiblehabits]

Feedback is always feedback and it is always love! Thank you, I appreciate it greatly! :D

I must admit I like that sentence too! In films and books and whatnots there's always the handsome dark stranger, right? Well....I would be quite scared if a tall dark stranger approached me in the dead of night! XD

Thanks again, I hope you like the rest of the story when it's posted. ^^

[redroses1791]

lol exactly! i'd be a MESS if a dark+handsome stranger did that! omglololol.

welcome! <3 i'm sure i will x3 hehe

[invisiblehabits]

Unless it was Tora. Tora can molest me whenever he so pleases. XD

As can Kenzo...

[invisiblehabits]

Kenzo IS a brat! And I love him. He is very interesting to write in this, and mostly behaving which is surprising. He is also completely unafraid of pushing Tora's buttons, which is very fun if you ask me.

You did tell me that and you should recognise it, considering I stole the trait from you...hehe. I was thinking about the whole stranger thing, and to be honest I would be terrified if a tall dark stranger approached me at night! I can't really see the sexy side of it when you apply reality to the fantasy... But yes, if it was Tora I would definitely want him to JUMP ME!

And no, it's not the last time. Though I still don't know if that's a good or a bad thing...

[velvet_liquor]

♥ (okay, the heart decided to look ugly or is it just Opera being a bitch? xD)

Now I definitely want more, so make sure to whip you muses' asses and finish writing ASAP /o/
I kneeeeew the story would be interesting, and I was right! *____*
And now I'll wait for Hakuei to show up xDDD

*huggles* <3<3<3<3

[invisiblehabits]

That is just Opera being a bitch. ♥

At the moment my muses are sort of behaving, I'm hoping they continue to do so. I have quite a bit written, but I won't post the next chapter till I have a bit more, just to be on the safe side. I'm glad you like it so far, I hope you'll enjoy the rest. ^^

And I'm thrilled you're writing! *huggles*

[invisiblehabits]

Eh...reading. Yay for being hooked on writing though!

[invisiblehabits]

Yay! I'm glad you're excited! I like you being excited about my story! :D

And yes, Kenzo is a brat! But I liiiiike him! To be honest I like him more with every chapter I write, I hope you will too. But I honestly hadn't even thought of including his lip biting....now I most definitely have to! Thank you! <3

Tora is always breathtaking and he makes such a gorgeous vampire! Shou does too, of course, and I think I'm gonna have a lot of fun with them all. Still...Tora is Tora and as beautiful as Shou might be he can never be Tora. Yes, I am biased. XD

Trust me, there are many more gorgeous people to be introduced yet. I'm looking forward to seeing your reactions and thoughts on all of them, because I love you for reading and commenting! I really do. :D

[invisiblehabits]

He is ridiculously loveable! He even gets to be background picture on my beloved mobile, so I get many doses of prettiness.

He's also a perfect vampire! The only sad thing is he doesn't get to keep his lovely skin colour, but the rest is all there unchanged. If anything it gets enhanced! At least with my look on vampires, everything just gets prettier when you're undead.

And yes, the lip biting will be included somehow. I'm thinking of tossing it into the scene I'm writing right now, where our beloved little creature is rather frustrated at the even smaller not-so-dead sort of main character, hehe.

[akiyaimitation]

Mmmmm hotness. See they're not even doing anything unmentionable yet and they're already hot. Per default I guess xD

Weirdly, I particularly loved the beginning and not just because of Kenzo (lovelovelove). I guess it's the way you describe their relationship to each other - both Tora and Kenzo but also uruha and Ruki. I can't wait to learn more...

Oh and Mao <3 Maaoooooooooo

*Is not craving some SID already noo*

Anyway, something a little less useless? I dunno... I like that you caught the mood of a real vampire story. Makes me miss reading them xD But I'll take this over any other any time. Vampires + Jrockers + buttsecks = epic win. Yesyesyes.

and... okay maybe Tora's a little hot too

*Runs like a coward for that comment*

Lovelove!

/Aki

[invisiblehabits]

Maybe? Maybe?! And a little