War and Peace and Vampires -- Chapter 02

[invisiblehabits]

Title: War and Peace and Vampires
Chapter: 02/??
Author: invisiblehabits
Beta: tingedwords
Genre: AU/Angst/Romance
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Blood, violence
Pairings: Tora/Hiroto, Aki/Kenzo
Disclaimer: Don’t own, don’t know. Won’t make money unless you feel like paying me to read.
Summary: He didn’t even care if his cries of pain and fear and panic woke people up, made them

Comments

[anselik]

Genius!

The Kenzo and Aki scene, wow. I wait for the day when they meet again. Even though the circumstance that Aki faced was horrible, i like how Kenzo was his rescuer. Very touching. I wonder what made him do all of that for Aki?

Poor Poor Hiroto. Temptation is such painfully sweet pleasure.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Love your writing!

[invisiblehabits]

That scene is very important, I'll tell you that much. I feel like I'm being very cruel to the boys I love so much, haha, because what Aki faced was truly horrible. Luckily Kenzo was there, for reasons so far only he knows... ((And when I say only he I mean he hasn't bothered to share them with me just yet X3))

Aaah, I had so much fun imagining that shower scene. I don't blame Pon, not at all!

Thank you so much! It means a lot, more than you'll ever know, to hear you say such a thing. More will come, I promise. ^^

[invisiblehabits]

Aki and Kenzo are as given as ToraPon to me! Admittedly all four of them; Aki, Kenzo, Tora and Pon can be mixed up pretty much any way you want and it's still gorgeous! But if I had to set fixed pairings it would be ToraPon and AkiZo...I think. ToraZo is very, very good too! XD

I'm glad you like them together though! :D

[invisiblehabits]

I LOVE YOU for picking up on that detail! Kenzo did kill the entire family, and whatever people came looking for them, all too keep Aki alive and safe. Admirable or despicable? It's hard to tell really. He is a vampire after all, killing comes natural to him, but does it make it right, especially when you take way more than you need? Yes, yes, I do love you for noticing the moral issue of it all.

And still, I too stick to Kenzo's side any day. Which I guess is a good thing since I'm writing it... But thank you!

And Pon, poor darling little Pon. I don't blame him either, nu-uh! Who knew chilly fingers could be so hot?

[invisiblehabits]

I am so sorry for taking forever and half a decade to reply to this! I read it on my phone during lunch break, because I love your comments and I needed something to brighten my mood at the time, and then completely forgot to reply when I got home because I am a complete fool! *is ashamed*

I'm endlessly pleased to hear you like this story so much! Kenzo has taken on a surprisingly large role in it, something I didn't realise he would but I doubt you'll complain about that, and even though he likes being difficult I love his character here. Oh heck, I love him! (and yes, we both know we would both like to wake up and have him staring down on us!)

Aki IS gorgeous and they are so beautifully broken both of them, you'll see in a little while, hehe.

Pon, Pon, Pon, Pon, oh how deep in trouble you already are without even knowing it. I won't spoil the next chapters for you, but I do hope you'll like it, even if there might be more questions than answers coming up.

Thank you hun! And sorry again.

[invisiblehabits]

I do like your comments! When my boss has been bitching at me for doing what I'm told, simply because she's got trouble completing her work, it's very nice to get out and read a silly excited comment, trust me. <3

At the moment I am, however, horrifically STUCK because of not so much darling little Zo... *glares*

[velvet_liquor]

I'm baaaaaaaaack darliiiing <33333

Hmm, Kenzo saved Aki from an agonizing death? Now I wonder what their relationship is at this moment of the story~
oh and Hiroto can't stop thinking about Tora? How cute and totally understandable xD now I want Pon to see Tora again \o\ <3

I hope you'll post the third chapter soon <3323

[invisiblehabits]

Yaaaaay! I've missed you! <3333

He did indeed! More will be explained about them later, I promise. I enjoy writing them in this story, have some interesting scenes with them I hope to be able to include. :D

Nope, Pon cannot stop thinking about Tora. Then again, who could? Or can! For that matter. Just hang in there a little longer, I think you'll like the next chapter. ;)