Comments | invisiblelove: luau offering for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/bittersweet325">bittersweet325</a></strong> "richard in the modern world"

invisiblelove

luau offering for bittersweet325 "richard in the modern world"

Jul 10, 2010 09:57

I am a total fail and just now getting to my first luau offering *facepalm* Is that catch up day here yet?? ;)

This is for Queen bittersweet325, who requested "Richard in the Modern World". I hope it pleases her majesty!!

( Richard maintains a white-knuckled grip on the arm rest and grits his teeth as Frank begins their descent... )

richard/miles, fanfic, luau 2010, lost

Comments 22

haldoor July 10 2010, 22:14:59 UTC

Nicely done! Poor Richard! But Miles will look after him, so everything will be okay. ;-)

invisiblelove July 11 2010, 03:31:28 UTC

Hee, yes. I like fixing them so that everything will be okay ;)

Thanks for commenting :D

jaydblu July 10 2010, 22:42:53 UTC

Aw, Richard. I really liked this. I can totally see Miles making the offer the way he did. Very nice. :)

invisiblelove July 11 2010, 03:31:50 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

ozmissage July 11 2010, 03:27:27 UTC

I love this so much! Richard's anxiety felt so real and Miles's offer to let Richard stay with him made me squee. There's something so comforting about knowing they'll have each other. Awesome fic!

invisiblelove July 11 2010, 03:32:27 UTC

Thank you! Squee-inducing is always good ;)

tellshannon815 July 11 2010, 18:02:36 UTC

Love your depiction of Richard's thoughts here!

invisiblelove July 13 2010, 01:47:47 UTC

Thank you! :)

eponine119 July 12 2010, 01:11:03 UTC

This is great. Miles' dialogue, especially is SO in character. Good work. :)

invisiblelove July 13 2010, 01:48:17 UTC

Thank you so much! Thanks for commenting :)