Justin ... I feel justified (again, no pun intended) in my suspicions of him, though at the same time I sympathize with his fears for his family and himself. Still, a minor "boo! hiss!" for Justin. And a wonderfully realized characterization from beginning to end.
Cho ... just as coercive Doms put my back up, possessive people who expect to be the center and entire of their Significant Others' universe set my back up. So I was rather irritated with Cho's irritation with Harry at times. On the other hand, I can definitely understand her frustration and sense of something wrong in the relationship
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Thank you! Very glad you enjoyed it so much (God, I feel like its mother, sending it off to a new school and hoping the other kids will like it, even though it's not perfect - I have never had this sense of fretfulness over a piece of writing), and also very grateful for the quibbles. Will go and poke text with a stick.
Lovely, absolutely lovely. Draco lost none of his snark, but I believed every moment of his tumbled fall from the dubious honor of his Death Eater position to the awkward isolation at Hogwarts. The sex was hot, steamy and not at all gratuitous. (Not that I'd mind, terribly.)
I can't believe this. You are my new hero. Unbelievable. Thank you so much for writing this! I will write more coherently once I gather myself enough to re-read. Once, again, bravo!
I am getting SUCH a blast from y'all reading this!
I mean, I love the characters to pieces, and it's just making my morning having other people get to meet them and like them too. Really pleased you enjoyed it.
Honest to God, the worry of letting people down is a killer, here. Argh. FWIW, Snape goes on to become DADA professor after Dumbledore's death. This means, however, that a new Potions Master is needed, and eventually the red-haired Verity Hemlock's going to be taken on. Now, she's no Lily Evans, but she smokes Lily's cigarettes and she's going to annoy the life out of Snape with her methods (and he despises The Bluffer's Guide series with all his soul), but the thing is she actually IS a bloody good Potions wizard. And utterly unawed by him. And he likes her laugh, although wild dragons wouldn't wring this admissin from him. Eventually, I'm fairly sure, Snape is going to start washing his hair.
....all this and much more may, at some point, make it out of my head and onto a screen. Possibly. Clovis has sent the plot bunnies to eat my brain, God help me.
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Justin ... I feel justified (again, no pun intended) in my suspicions of him, though at the same time I sympathize with his fears for his family and himself. Still, a minor "boo! hiss!" for Justin. And a wonderfully realized characterization from beginning to end.
Cho ... just as coercive Doms put my back up, possessive people who expect to be the center and entire of their Significant Others' universe set my back up. So I was rather irritated with Cho's irritation with Harry at times. On the other hand, I can definitely understand her frustration and sense of something wrong in the relationship ( ... )
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I mean, I love the characters to pieces, and it's just making my morning having other people get to meet them and like them too. Really pleased you enjoyed it.
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Honest to God, the worry of letting people down is a killer, here. Argh. FWIW, Snape goes on to become DADA professor after Dumbledore's death. This means, however, that a new Potions Master is needed, and eventually the red-haired Verity Hemlock's going to be taken on. Now, she's no Lily Evans, but she smokes Lily's cigarettes and she's going to annoy the life out of Snape with her methods (and he despises The Bluffer's Guide series with all his soul), but the thing is she actually IS a bloody good Potions wizard. And utterly unawed by him. And he likes her laugh, although wild dragons wouldn't wring this admissin from him. Eventually, I'm fairly sure, Snape is going to start washing his hair.
....all this and much more may, at some point, make it out of my head and onto a screen. Possibly. Clovis has sent the plot bunnies to eat my brain, God help me.
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