Yes, I know I'm being annoying and anyway someone has probably caught it (btw, if it was a deliberate tense switch, it didn't work. Do the whole para in present if you want the effect).
But this is a truly great fic. I don't want any blemishes spoiling the full effect.
Because this is so bloody close to absolutely superb
No, you're being the very opposite of annoying - it's so bloody difficult catching all the wee typos and stupidities that I'm just awash with gratitude when people help me catch 'em.
Harry turned Justin into a frog at the same moment that someone else petrified him "Old Etonian or tacky rocky accessory? The choice is yours, Mr Finch-Fletchley. The choice is yours."
Oooooohhhh. So mad at Justin right now. I started suspecting him a couple of chapters back, but kind of hoped I was wrong because that will hurt Draco so bad. Oh lordy.
Oh, I know -- POOR Draco. Like he doesn't have enough trust issues already. Poor little bugger. Really, I felt so thoroughly dreadful for him that I had problems with writing all this bit - I was terribly worried about how I could get him through all the shit without breaking him for good and ever.
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Past tense, dear, past tense.
Yes, I know I'm being annoying and anyway someone has probably caught it (btw, if it was a deliberate tense switch, it didn't work. Do the whole para in present if you want the effect).
But this is a truly great fic. I don't want any blemishes spoiling the full effect.
Because this is so bloody close to absolutely superb
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"Old Etonian or tacky rocky accessory? The choice is yours, Mr Finch-Fletchley. The choice is yours."
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Justin! No! Draco! No! Lucius! NO! This is just... oh, Fay, you're killing me.
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*Buries head*.
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I'm SO tempted to put that on an icon.
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