[Hart Royal: PG, Merlin/Arthur]

Oct 10, 2009 14:18

Title: Hart Royal ( Read more... )

!fic, merlin

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rivendells October 11 2009, 00:46:37 UTC
Oh akldsjflkd this was just SO extraordinarily epic, and I adored it from start to finish. You have such a poignant writing style, so much that the simplest phrases were incredibly effective. I know I'll be coming back to read this again and again, and thank you for writing something so lovely! WONDERFUL! ♥

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inwhatfurnace October 12 2009, 00:35:56 UTC
♥♥♥ Thank you so so much for reading, I'm so glad you liked it!

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timewaslost October 11 2009, 00:58:31 UTC
oh my god. this is so beautiful. and so tragic. fantastic.

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inwhatfurnace October 12 2009, 00:34:09 UTC
Thank you so much! I always get a little sad watching the show, watching these fantastic characters who are going to end up torn apart.

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fresica October 11 2009, 01:44:01 UTC
I love the format you've used - like snapshots of the foursome's future. The end imagery is almost chilling, and so achingly sad without being heartbreaking. Congratulations on a really well done fic!

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inwhatfurnace October 12 2009, 00:31:36 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! What you described was exactly what I was going for.

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b_b_banana October 11 2009, 04:28:30 UTC
Wow. This gives poignant a whole new meaning. Five stars. :)

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inwhatfurnace October 12 2009, 00:30:56 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ♥

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dk323 October 11 2009, 05:30:29 UTC
Absolutely gorgeous! I enjoyed this greatly. I love how you wrote this - it just felt so epic. I like how it was a collection of snapshots through the years ending with Arthur's death. It was haunting in places and the ending was bittersweet, but in the end, it felt true to the legend (well, at least what the show is making of it).

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inwhatfurnace October 12 2009, 00:24:09 UTC
♥♥ Thank you so much! I definitely wanted a legend-like feel to the story, I'm so glad it got across. Thank you for reading!

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