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[inwonderland_]

Title: Once Upon A Time
Rating: R
Pairing: Hermione/Charlie
Summary: Hermione's head over heels with Charlie. Charlie is only after one thing. Unrequited love, angst.
Author Notes: For a meme of inell. She gave me the lyrics and I wrote the fic for them. :D No, I have never heard the song, and I didn't read the rest of the lyrics. Oops.

Comments

[angiepangie25]

Holy crap, what did you do to Charlie?! He's such a... dick. It was good though. I could relate to what Hermione was feeling, poor girl. I'm glad she came to her senses and got the hell out. I'm glad you didn't make Charlie a nice guy in the end too, it would have taken something away I think.

I'll just pretend it wasn't really Chalie. It was, er, Malfoy in a Charlie suit. Yeah, that's it, I don't like him anyway. *looses herself in denial*

[inwonderland_]

Thank you!

Well... if you think about it... we don't know much about Charlie at all. He could be like this. I mean, he's probably not, because I like fluffy Charlie/Hermione myself, but, hehe, he's not nice here.

I think most girls can relate to Hermione at some point.

Thanks for reading it, and telling me what you thought.

I like my Malfoy mean too :P

[porphyriasarah]

Awesome stunning fic and haven't we all known/been with a guy like Charlie? And realized just like Hermione did that we deserve more that a sore neck and jaw, raw lips, and (depending on the guy) that icky taste in out mouths? And unfortunately a lot of guys are like that...decent enough fellows with family and friends but going through life treating women as disposeable hand wipes... and completely clueless that its wrong! Love your writing and insight!

[inwonderland_]

I've had someone like that, or someone I think is like that. I'm still with him, trying to work out what to do next. I felt it would help to look at it from a different perspective, and I think it has. I still don't know.

I'm glad you liked it, it means a lot to me. *hugs* ♥

[porphyriasarah]

*hugs back* btw, loving your icon! Very yummilicious!

[millieweasley]

This fic was wonderfully written, and as it has already been said, we have all found ourselves in situations like these. I wonder, however, if I'm the only one that feels like slapping Hermione instead of Charlie. After all, she knows what he's after and she choses to put herself in this situation, just as she choses not to tell him what's wrong and what she wants from him. If I could have kicked myself for all the times I was so stupid *shakes head*. At least I learned from my mistakes and it seems Hermione will too.