My First Castle Fanfic

May 08, 2012 23:17

What can I say, when the muse kicks in, she works fast, and I end up dipping my toes into yet another new fandom. Needless to say, I was inspired. If anyone out there knows any LJ comms I can post this at, let me know!

Title: Palm to Palm
Author: Aenaria/io_aenariaFandom: Castle ( Read more... )

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cxw1065 May 9 2012, 10:35:56 UTC
Lovely Caskett voices. Would love to see this (or something similar) in s5

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io_aenaria May 9 2012, 23:31:49 UTC
If S5 started off even remotely like this I can't tell you how happy I would be. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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tinlizzie82 May 9 2012, 15:51:03 UTC
That was beautifully done. Hard to believe it is your first effort in this fandom.

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io_aenaria May 9 2012, 23:38:25 UTC
If it helps I've seen every episode - multiple times. ;) And read one of the books. And read a lot, a lot of fanfic. Thank you for reading - I'm glad you liked it!

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elinox May 9 2012, 16:46:46 UTC
Nicely done, thanks for sharing this!

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io_aenaria May 9 2012, 23:38:39 UTC
Thank you for reading it!

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katerine_sedai May 9 2012, 16:51:05 UTC
Really good first job! Just one small nitpick: Castle's bedroom is off of his office on the first floor, and not upstairs with Martha and Alexis.

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io_aenaria May 9 2012, 23:42:52 UTC
1) Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

2) *Runs off to fix the issue* Thanks for catching that - I wouldn't have known otherwise. Do you know if there's a wiki out there or something similar out there for future reference on location issues like that?

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mollywheezy May 10 2012, 17:13:29 UTC
I LOLed at Castle's lying to Esposito. Poor Espo . . . off on a wild goose chase. ;) Castle could have lied and said Beckett just called and was bringing coffee over . . .

I loved her question about Castle and Alexis and his answer. That was beautiful and my favorite part of the story.

Excellent job!

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io_aenaria May 14 2012, 23:33:07 UTC
Oh, let's just say in part two that lie's going to catch up to Beckett and she's going to have to face the music... ;)

Thank you for reading - I'm really glad you liked it!

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aprilbegins May 13 2012, 23:13:18 UTC
I didn't expect to be inspired by a fic but this part really spoke to me and was really in Castle's voice:

“I’d want her to be happy,” he said softly. “I’d want her to remember the good times we had, and talk about me to her friends and her kids, and I’d want her to live a good, long life. And I think that, more than anything, your mother wants that for you too.”

I think I needed to read that, because of a personal experience similar to Beckett's. So thank you very much for writing it.

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io_aenaria May 14 2012, 23:35:52 UTC
I'm very glad that this little story was able to help you a little bit. *big hugs for you* Thank you for reading it.

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