Castle Fic: Palm to Palm, Part Two

May 15, 2012 22:36

Title: Palm to Palm, Part Two
Author: Aenaria/io_aenariaCharacters/Pairings: Castle/Beckett ( Read more... )

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xdawnfirex May 16 2012, 05:47:57 UTC
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE

^ That's what I think.

If you're leaning toward vignettes, then write vignettes. If you find a plot, run with it. I say let the story lead you where it wants to go. :)

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elinox May 16 2012, 14:59:01 UTC
A nice look into Jim as a character, cool.

Grammatical note: "Castle whispered back as pulled her close..." You need to add a 'he' in there. ;)

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purely_distel May 16 2012, 22:23:15 UTC
brilliant start to your own personal version of s5 and ... I think you're right. There is a lot of potential for more in these two little chapters (well, not so little, but you know what I mean) and I could very well see it as something that has a proper plot. Well, I'll read whatever you end up doing, just thought I'd put my two cents in <3

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kae_nine May 18 2012, 20:30:22 UTC
Just read both parts in a row and loved it. After watching Always, I read an amazing amount of one-shots dealing with the morning after, and this is among the ones where I recognised the characters and didn't feel like it was "yet another morning-after" story. So kudos for that.

Lots of potential for more indeed, but as for vignettes vs full-length story, that's really up to you. Depends on whether you have an A plot that links it all together or want to focus solely on the characters and their relationships, in which case I'd say vignettes it is.

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