Fic: The Man Who Can't Be Moved

Aug 29, 2010 17:05

Title: The Man Who Can’t Be Moved
Characters: Masuda, Tegoshi, Nishikido
Rating: PG
Prompt: Apples
Notes: This is a reaaaaally late gift fic for treegonometry . You may never read this now, but better late than never, right? Lol. Thank you for finding that lovely poem from before, it's one of my favorites now. Title and premise of the fic is largely based from the ( Read more... )

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meli_29 August 29 2010, 22:35:54 UTC
I loved it ♥
I could see Massu and Nishikido talking in that park and I started thinking in the scent of apples xD (I usually don't pay attention to that kind of things).
The ending and the outtake were my favorite parts.
Great job!

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iolekei August 30 2010, 01:52:26 UTC
Aww, thank you for the heart ♥
Can't exactly explain it, but apples have a distinct smell, ne? It's like you can smell the tartness/sweetness :)
Glad you liked, and thank you for reading!

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fancyann1974 August 29 2010, 22:41:29 UTC
so sweet
thank you for sharing this lovely story

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iolekei August 30 2010, 01:53:12 UTC
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it :)

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hikarihina August 29 2010, 22:44:31 UTC
That was so sweet! I loved the ending.
Thanks a lot for sharing!

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iolekei August 30 2010, 01:54:49 UTC
Happy that you liked it!
Thank -you- for reading~

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zheinpathos August 29 2010, 23:11:50 UTC
Awww, Massu! <3 Ryo's snarky and softie attitude warms my heart :D

I see ninja!Eito! 8D AND OHHH BONUS RYOPI! XD

Lovely work :D

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iolekei August 30 2010, 01:58:17 UTC
Ryo's all bark and no bite anyway-- wait, scratch that. I forgot he bites too, lol XDDD but yeah, Ryo is <3
I can't leave Ryo unhap-PI :3

Thanks for reading!

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erikaoi August 29 2010, 23:24:22 UTC
Aw that was nice,though tego bit cruel,he shouldn’t take months to come back.but glad he finally.
that ryo meeting pi,it needs some attention.a continue would be awesome.

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iolekei August 30 2010, 02:03:26 UTC
Well, Massu knows Tegoshi will come back to/for him in the end, anyway <3
In my head, the outtake part was written as such so I can continue it as RyoPi. But only in my head, lol. I suck at continuations, tbh :Dv
Thank you for reading :)

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erikaoi August 30 2010, 02:58:19 UTC
aww...you will never know unless you try. but its all up to you

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