Two Weeks In Hawaii [12/14 + Epilogue]

May 13, 2010 16:12

Title: Two Weeks In Hawaii [12/14 + Epilogue]
Author: ipanicdaily
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon, Spencer/Jon, Ryan/Pete (past), Gabe/Will, Nate/Alex
POV: 3rd; Ryan-centric.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Don't own anyone/anything other than the plot. The title belongs to the band Hellogoodbye.
Summary: “Hawaii is more my element.” Brendon paused a few feet from Ryan ( Read more... )

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fuzzy_rainbows May 16 2010, 00:27:41 UTC
YOU POSTED! *flails and goes to read*

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fuzzy_rainbows May 16 2010, 02:45:22 UTC
Oh my gosh, is it sad that I started crying..? >.<
So sweet and SO romantic... Can't wait for more! I'll be keeping my eye out for it.

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ipanicdaily May 16 2010, 13:49:20 UTC
I looked at this comment when my friend was over and she was spazzing about your icon, jsyk xD

Yeah...I don't much like this chapter...xD

I'm working on ch13! I have like...1.5 pages written! xP I hope it won't take so long...

xoxo Tabi

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pheonix_passion May 16 2010, 02:49:22 UTC
Omg I got so happy when I saw this and even happier once I finish reading it this chapter was pure perfection! I love you and this fic I can't wait for more.

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ipanicdaily May 16 2010, 13:50:25 UTC
Thank you ^^

I have ch13 started so I hope it won't take so damn long to get out this time...

xoxo Tabi

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slywolf9 May 16 2010, 03:04:20 UTC
Awww. That was absolutely delightful. I really enjoyed the whole tone of the thing, that we got to see a different side of William and whatnot. And god did you have me utterly confused about everything. I mean, it seems like maybe Will will be with Gabe, but then you might pull a fast one on us and make him be with Travie. I hate that Bden doesn't much care for Gabe... Just 'cause Gabe is so awesome. Admittedly not so much in this story, but he is!! <3

I also really enjoyed how sweet Bden was; that he threw his phone into the water haha. And that Ryan realized that yeah, Brendon isn't Pete and wouldn't hurt him [during the whole part where Ry was upset because he said no, etc.]

UGH! I DON'T WANT THEM TO LEAVE EACH OTHER! I hate that this is coming to an end..!! D: It's so delightful! I also really enjoyed this because I was reading it late and night, was tired and in this good lazy mood and listening to Doug Does Decaydance.

Anyway, all these updates are hella worth the wait. :]]]]

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ipanicdaily May 16 2010, 13:54:56 UTC
I know. It's hard for me making Gabe this way in this story because I fucking love Gabey too xD But I had to try a different side. Gabe's got problems too -- namely commitment ones. William does love him, though, and that'll never change. Just like his love for Travie never changed.

You'll find out what Bill does in ch13

Well Brendon got irritated with his phone. It was interrupting his make out session with Ryan xD Ryan KNOWS that Brendon isn't Pete, but it takes a lot more to actually convince himself... D:

I'm actually kinda glad it's ending...*cough*...and I have no idea what Doug Does Decaydance is...

Hahah I'm glad you think so, but I absolutely hate making people wait so long! It's just...I had a shitload of issues trying to get ch12 done. Ch13 is more interesting to me, and ch14 is going to be short [well, short for me; meaning probably ~5k words] so I hope to get them out.

Thanks for reading :3

xoxo Tabi

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slywolf9 May 24 2010, 22:15:58 UTC
FUCK!v I wrote this long reply and I accidentally pressed delete email instead of post reply.

So here is an abridged version:

Doug Does Decaydance is this guy singing songs from the label, like Panic!, Cobra, FOB, TAI, etc. songs, but with a jazz-ish twist. It's actually really relaxing and cool if you don't mind your fav songs being changed around. I'd share it with you, but I don't really know how..

Don't worry about making us wait. You have enough problems up your sleeve with broken hard drives, lost notebooks and ninja cats set on destroying your work. It's always worth the wait!! So I don't mind waiting.

I know I never respond to it, so thank you for liking my icon! Atashi! I love Chobits! :D

Can't wait for whatever comes out next! [I'm sorry about the Untouchables thing :[ I was lookin' forward to it..I'm sure it was super awesome!]

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btgrlluvsrbn May 16 2010, 04:45:00 UTC
He wanted to be selfish and have Brendon all to himself though he knew that maybe William needed him a bit more. My sentiments exactly from the last chapter.

So happy they got 'alone' time! YAY!! They need all the time they can get to figure things out. EEK - and only two more days left. (actually one when you think about it) B carrying R made my face go :DDD, and cuddled together on a blanket in paradise? *sigh* so sweet..

Bottom line, I think I know what will happen. Hope I'm right. I am just excited to see HOW this unfolds. :)

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ipanicdaily May 16 2010, 13:57:46 UTC
Brendon was all like "Ok so I know my friend needs me, but goddammit I only have Ryan for 2 more days!" and made sure they got their time. Brenny skipped work xD

I thought it'd be cute/funny to have Brendon carry Ryan and Ryan freak out. Just more emphasis on Brendon's muscles (though Ryan's not all that heavy...)

Blanket cuddles are perfect <3

Yayy for thinking! I know how it's going to end, so I win xP

We'll see if you're right though. It outta be interesting ^^

xoxo Tabi

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kisskiss_bang May 16 2010, 05:15:10 UTC
So I laughed A LOT in this chapter. So awesome.
I'm glad that William and Gabe are back on good terms, or so it seems.
I'm so glad that you're finishing the story. I'm exited to see how this ends.
You're a rockstar <3

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ipanicdaily May 16 2010, 13:59:43 UTC
Laughing is good ^^

William and Gabe are back on good terms. [strike]for now at least[/strike]

I told myself that no matter what, I was finishing this story. I've quit too many already. And so what if it only took me a year to do 14 chapters + an epilogue xD

YOU CAN'T RUSH CREATIVITY! xP

I'm super curious about what people will think of the ending so I'm kinda really motivated to get there xD

Thank chu :3

xoxo Tabi

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