Title: Under the Lights of Sin City [3/3]
Author:
ipanicdailyPairing: Ryan/Brendon, Jon/Spencer, tons more
POV: 3rd; Ryan-centric.
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: If I owned anyone in this story [beside Mia and Kade], do you honestly think I'd be writing it? No, I'd be out making it happen. :]
Summary: There were some really great pictures of all kinds of things
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I do know, however, that I was an avid reader of it.
I enjoyed it immensly and couldn't ask for a more perfect fianl part.
It was hot and sweet and perfect.
That start made me hot and the end made me cry happy tears.
To me, the mark of a good author, is feeling the highs and lows of the characters life.
And you fully acheived that.
Loved it. Sorry for not regularly commenting but much love for you.
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Well thank you. I'm glad people really like my writing <3 I personally just feel like I can do a lot better but... oh well.
that's fine. you're commenting now.
<3
xoxo Tabi
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xoxo Tabi
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I've been reading this for a while, and (shamefully) I've never dropped you a line to tell you that this story has kept me checking SATD every time I log onto my computer. It's utterly amazing.
and gaaaah you made me cry! I could picture that picture Brendon unveiled and it's so perfect! You're like a genius! The ending was beautifully sappy and wonderful! I haven't got anything more to say except that this, m'dear, was incredible. <3
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The ending was incredibly sappy. I didn't mean for it to get so sappy but...I was doing this at like 4am so lack of sleep twisted it that way xD
Thanks for reading and now commenting
xoxo Tabi
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Ok, so I was picturing a crazy ass impromptu wedding, but I liked this ending better!! I loved the sappy-ass ending!! So so much...
Waited until this chapter to post a few thoughts. re: last chapter, I think you were way too nice to Pete. But, I guess everyone deserves redemption somewhere. sometime. maybe. And I certainly did not want the Pete/Patrick wedding thing, I wanted it for Ry/Bren. But, as it is, it worked out just fine.
Ok, so now I get to say what I said somewhere in the middle and you said it was too early. Here goes:
And they lived happily ever after. In Hawaii.(well, as I see it) With lots of hammock sex. Lots. of. sex. Nice write. :D
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I could have been mean to Pete, but I'm like always really mean to Pete just 'cause I personally dislike him, so I thought I would be a little nicer. But in a way I was still mean 'cause Ryan realized that he's a lot better off without Pete anyway.
Hahah. yes they do :)
xoxo Tabi
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The ending made me cry....
I love u!!
U need to write a book or some shit....
*sniffles*
U are my hero and favorite peson right now XD
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I don't think I have the patience to write a book :P
It took me long enough just to get this done xD
thanks for reading + commenting <3
xoxo Tabi
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