Comments | iphifix: Circumstance (HP)

iphifix

Circumstance (HP)

Oct 10, 2009 22:36

Fandom: Harry Potter
Pairing(s): Lily/Severus (with mentions of Lily/James)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1308
Summary: Lily doesn't understand why Severus will no longer speak to her. Surely love can overcome all obstacles?
Warnings: Tragic. Also a lot of jumping around in time, so hopefully that's not too confusing!
A/N: I wanted to write something from ( Read more... )

s/l, fic, rating: pg, harry potter, het

Comments 6

the_emi October 11 2009, 06:13:43 UTC

Oh, lovely! <3

iphifix October 11 2009, 06:17:59 UTC

Thank you!

shyfoxling October 14 2009, 04:41:38 UTC

There's a few typos and things in this, but the story itself is nicely done, with good imagery and that certain flavour of angst we so often get with this ship.

iphifix October 19 2009, 02:58:11 UTC

Yeah, I guess that's what happens when you write at midnight and then slap it up... I'll take another look soon. Thanks!

sarahetc October 18 2009, 15:41:30 UTC

Really like this. I like the entire tone of uncertainy and longing. I especially love this:

Severus, with whom she learned the lessons of patience, forgiveness, love…

Thanks!

iphifix October 19 2009, 02:58:30 UTC

Thank you! :)