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xsilentserenity January 13 2012, 04:40:00 UTC
claiming a spot! i said i was a ninja!! :)

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ipsuren January 13 2012, 04:47:41 UTC
omg i'm not even done updating everything how did you what

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xsilentserenity January 13 2012, 05:01:56 UTC
I've actually gained quite the reputation with the authors of stories I follow. I'm like THE spot ninja; I even have a couple ninja-in-trainings.^^

and this chapter... like.. wow. Like.. the setting.. and the storyline. Everything is So interesting!

The history of the Ipsuren really intrigued me, and I wonder what happened to the First! And Heechul's character is really sweet, though he's himself, in his ways..

and Sungmin is still as caring as ever... and I'm really curious as to why Heechul and Sungmin were so... horrified that it was Siwon!

I can't wait for the next chapter! I'll be waiting! :)

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ipsuren January 13 2012, 05:18:09 UTC
i am impressed. allow me to bow to your superior ninja ability. /bowbow

I'm glad you liked it! I had fun writing out the setting for this chapter, especially describing the Inception ceremony. This fic has been so dark and gloomy it was fun to write about something light and colorful and festive for once!

thank you!! see you next week ♥

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lovetails January 13 2012, 05:02:34 UTC
why is everything that surrounds the ceremony seems so...sinister? i love it though :p

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ipsuren January 13 2012, 05:19:50 UTC
i'm glad you still liked it even though it was...yeah. i guess sinister would be the right word to use XD

thanks for commenting ♥

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peperokiss January 13 2012, 05:38:07 UTC
OH MY GOODNESS ;_______________;

This is such a great story! I swear, I can't wait till Donghae turns into one of them, oh my goodness, goodbye innocent kid from the Gutter, hello glorious Ipsuren Donghae. -3- <3333 But poor bb, he's going to suffer a lot, isn't he? T___T

I'll be waiting for chapter 6! Hope you update soon! :)

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ipsuren January 13 2012, 06:03:23 UTC
Hi! I'm happy you like it and thank you for commenting!

In order to grow stronger, you need to suffer hardships, right?

see you next week ♥

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eunhae_holic86 January 13 2012, 05:39:31 UTC
spot

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eunhae_holic86 January 22 2012, 19:48:07 UTC
Now donghae become ipsuren he will forget his family and past every thing?
in Heechul's story the kid where is he he is the leader the one who killed the girl ?
omg i hope she didnt suffer
omg this story is amazing once start read it you cant stop even its full with unfamiliar names ..etc
its fun to read

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ipsuren January 23 2012, 00:34:44 UTC
forget his family and past? idk about that. i don't think that donghae could ever forget his family.

the kid was the one who killed the prostitute (by having sex with her, it's implied to have been an accident). he also grew into the leader, yes. and no one knows where he is now :3

i'm glad you're enjoying it even though the terms may be hard to follow ^^;

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noxas January 13 2012, 05:41:22 UTC
my what a ceremony...I didn't think it would be that horrible. As long as Donghae is strong willed, I'm sure he can get through it just fine. Even without Eunhyuk around...wait...where is he anyways? I was hoping he'd be around for the ceremony..GAH. It's okay, I disliked they way Jungmo and Jay treated him in the beginning..just because he was human...I guess that's just how it is for people who live in the Gutter. T______T I look forward to the next chapter! <3

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ipsuren January 13 2012, 06:06:47 UTC
Donghae is a strong person. He'll be fine XD

and yes, i felt bad about that, but...it's part of their job. the entire point of kuwaru is to break you down to build you back up. they need to purify you, and that means breaking down whatever ego you might have had as a human. sucks but. perfection isn't an easy goal to reach.

i'll see you next week! thanks for commenting ♥

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