Yayyyyy! You updated <3 Great way to wake uP in the morning, Im wide awake cos of seeing this xD Long chapter deserves a looong reply so I'll be back... I have school lol
First and foremost, lemme spazz that you updated. *squeeeeeeee*
Oke, now thats done...
Your descriptions are sooooo... you my dear awesome author, need to teach me *nodnod*
Colors. All the colors of the world merging and dancing and becoming one. They warped and bulged and stretched themselves across his vision, laying upon his mind like a soft, light blanket.
That's just a beautiful thing to visualise (but then knowing me, I'll probably go crosseyed or something XD)
Sungmin and pink never fail to amuse me X)
When he woke up he was surrounded by pink. A bed half the size of Eunhyuk’s, with pink sheets, pink pillow cases, pink walls, pink curtains, and on the floor, various rugs in different shades of pink overlapping each other.
The transformation sounds so... scary, yet mysterious and really painful. I love the way you describe the final stage of the process where 'the shell of his cracked humanity had peeled away', that just sounds so... the way you worded it, sounds so perfect... and then there's me thinking (Donghae is a
( ... )
teach...you? LOL i could definitely give you a few pointers. i'm really good at telling people what not to do ;3 as for what to do, i can tell you a few tips and tricks, but i think descriptive writing is something just comes from the soul. you either have it or you don't. but if you do have it, you have to know how to utilize that talent effectively. this part takes practice. a lot of practice. i've had a whole lifetime of the stuff.
miniming in this fic is like my new favourite and as for hyukjae's past...what kind of writer would i be if i dropped a bomb like that and didn't elaborate eventually?
but, :V you didn't like siwon before?
and the love subject. probably the most important subject of this entire fanfic.
lol hyuk. he so silly. getting all flustered and shit. no but srsly i'm glad you were satisfied by my porn. that is all.
OHMAIGAHHH!!!!*JAW DROPPED TO THE FLOOR* hottss..."... “I’ll call you anything you want,” Eunhyuk said, watching Donghae’s cock pop free, his face mischievous with delight. “Anything, as long as I can have this.”..."<---this sentence seriously disturbing...OMG *nosebleed*
I love how you describe the process of donghae become ipsuren and how difficult it is,including the pain...omg amazing..
yayy! i'm so happy you liked it ♥ tbh, personally, i liked the descriptions of hae's pain and suffering more than i liked the porn XD and it wasn't because i'm a sadist i just did not like the smut in this chapter at all
EunHae had sex *fire works* you didnt tell me there is smut in this chapter =P am i the only one who felt hot while you describing how HE IS "GREW UP" LOOL became a man i mean ipsuren OMG the way you described the ipsuren's cock its amazing its glowing XD i want to see it..*kicks* i know ipsuren not exist "Love is a lie humans tell themselves to give them that hope. We have no need of that here.”yes we live in a big fucking shit LIE soo Donghae have to have sex to becom fully ipsuren ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA how could you create this world omg ;; “Actually,” Eunhyuk grunted. “I’m trying to control myself right now. It’s kind of hard when you look like that.” GREAAAAAAAAAT START LEE EUNHYUK and they did it they hd sex i mean complete the transformation .(--) see you next chapter ~~sorry for my late comment i couldnt read it soon *hugsssssss* do you have twitter ?
ahhh, i wanted it to be a surprise? also, no. you were not the only one. muscly bonamana hae is incredibly hot.
as for creating the world, i had a little bit of help from Storm Constantine's WRAETHTHU series but i blame the rest on the fact that i am completely and totally insane
see you on thursday ♥ and, no, i don't have a twitter but...i have a tumblr?
also may i just point out how happy i am that your favourite part in this wasn't the smut? i really, really liked donghae's entire transformation. i feel like i got across everything i needed to get across and i hope that one day my readers will go back and re-read this. this chapter is like. the most pivotal chapter in this entire book, i think. i mean, more important, game-changing things will happen of course that will be just as, if not more important, but this chapter has, like, three main turning points in it.
I should be thanking you for dragging me out of my lurker reputation pahahahah.
aw, It's not that I don't like your smut or anything along those lines but this fic has so much more to it than smut if you know what I mean? there are so many intriguing parts that are favored and that sets it apart from other fics with smut if you get what I mean ^^ nothing beats self satisfaction, knowing that you're proud of the fact you got everything across that you needed, definitely tells that we can envision and understand~
yes! I 100% agree with you there, this chapter had plenty of important and main points in it which makes it even more memorable, yeah?
it makes me happy to know that someone who usually lurks was compelled to comment on my fic ;A;
oh, i know honey lol. what you're saying is like. i totally agree. i'm one of those really obnoxious slash/yaoi activists that get really irritated when the only thing people care about is smut. trust me, i was aiming to be an erotica author for a while, so i appreciate porn as much as any fangirl, but i also need plot, development, substance. Ipsuren is a plot based multichapter fic that happens to also have porn on the side. but it's not just for fapping purposes, it's also meant to give further insight into the character development and plot, because hebia is such a crucial aspect of Ipsuren lifestyle. they legit need it to survive.
i was explaining to a friend earlier that while humans have sex to reach climax, Ipsuren have sex to replenish their power and get to know one another.
shyly admits that I used to be a silent reader but holy omg I can't stay silent when you're writing an amazing chapter like this.
You must know, that your fic is the fic I'm most looking forward to read to nowadays. I just can't point it out but something about the story really get me drawn. Everything about the world, your characters, the plot, applause for you ;A;
This chapter is fdjsnkjsfdgdfg mindblowing I swear I gasped a couple of times. And the smut (or a ~ritual~ XD), dies it's hot. Thank you so much for updating! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
i wish i knew how many silent readers i have ;_; and i'm happy that this chapter was able to bring you out of hiding! now i know :3
and i hope you continue to read and comment! i wish i knew what to say...but this is one of those comments where i'm so excited/happy/grateful that i can't really think of anything to say except "omgsh tysfm"
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Great way to wake uP in the morning, Im wide awake cos of seeing this xD
Long chapter deserves a looong reply so I'll be back... I have school lol
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*squeeeeeeee*
Oke, now thats done...
Your descriptions are sooooo... you my dear awesome author, need to teach me *nodnod*
Colors. All the colors of the world merging and dancing and becoming one. They warped and bulged and stretched themselves across his vision, laying upon his mind like a soft, light blanket.
That's just a beautiful thing to visualise (but then knowing me, I'll probably go crosseyed or something XD)
Sungmin and pink never fail to amuse me X)
When he woke up he was surrounded by pink. A bed half the size of Eunhyuk’s, with pink sheets, pink pillow cases, pink walls, pink curtains, and on the floor, various rugs in different shades of pink overlapping each other.
The transformation sounds so... scary, yet mysterious and really painful. I love the way you describe the final stage of the process where 'the shell of his cracked humanity had peeled away', that just sounds so... the way you worded it, sounds so perfect... and then there's me thinking (Donghae is a ( ... )
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as for what to do, i can tell you a few tips and tricks, but i think descriptive writing is something just comes from the soul. you either have it or you don't. but if you do have it, you have to know how to utilize that talent effectively. this part takes practice. a lot of practice. i've had a whole lifetime of the stuff.
miniming in this fic is like my new favourite
and as for hyukjae's past...what kind of writer would i be if i dropped a bomb like that and didn't elaborate eventually?
but, :V
you didn't like siwon before?
and the love subject. probably the most important subject of this entire fanfic.
lol hyuk. he so silly. getting all flustered and shit.
no but srsly i'm glad you were satisfied by my porn. that is all.
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hottss..."...
“I’ll call you anything you want,” Eunhyuk said, watching Donghae’s cock pop free, his face mischievous with delight. “Anything, as long as I can have this.”..."<---this sentence seriously disturbing...OMG *nosebleed*
I love how you describe the process of donghae become ipsuren and how difficult it is,including the pain...omg amazing..
okay,now let me re-read that HOT part....
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tbh, personally, i liked the descriptions of hae's pain and suffering more than i liked the porn XD
and it wasn't because i'm a sadist i just did not like the smut in this chapter at all
tysm for commenting and i'll see you next week!
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yess!!!see u next week <33
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lol it happens
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am i the only one who felt hot while you describing how
HE IS "GREW UP" LOOL became a man i mean ipsuren
OMG the way you described the ipsuren's cock its amazing its glowing XD i want to see it..*kicks*
i know ipsuren not exist
"Love is a lie humans tell themselves to give them that hope. We have no need of that here.”yes we live in a big fucking shit LIE
soo Donghae have to have sex to becom fully ipsuren
ME GUSTA ME GUSTA ME GUSTA
how could you create this world omg ;;
“Actually,” Eunhyuk grunted. “I’m trying to control myself right now. It’s kind of hard when you look like that.”
GREAAAAAAAAAT START LEE EUNHYUK
and they did it they hd sex i mean complete the transformation .(--)
see you next chapter ~~sorry for my late comment
i couldnt read it soon
*hugsssssss*
do you have twitter ?
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also, no. you were not the only one. muscly bonamana hae is incredibly hot.
as for creating the world, i had a little bit of help from Storm Constantine's WRAETHTHU series but i blame the rest on the fact that i am completely and totally insane
see you on thursday ♥
and, no, i don't have a twitter but...i have a tumblr?
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/wibbles
thank youuuuu
also may i just point out how happy i am that your favourite part in this wasn't the smut? i really, really liked donghae's entire transformation. i feel like i got across everything i needed to get across and i hope that one day my readers will go back and re-read this. this chapter is like. the most pivotal chapter in this entire book, i think.
i mean, more important, game-changing things will happen of course that will be just as, if not more important, but this chapter has, like, three main turning points in it.
thank you again ♥
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aw, It's not that I don't like your smut or anything along those lines but this fic has so much more to it than smut if you know what I mean? there are so many intriguing parts that are favored and that sets it apart from other fics with smut if you get what I mean ^^
nothing beats self satisfaction, knowing that you're proud of the fact you got everything across that you needed, definitely tells that we can envision and understand~
yes! I 100% agree with you there, this chapter had plenty of important and main points in it which makes it even more memorable, yeah?
you're very welcome! (:
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oh, i know honey lol. what you're saying is like. i totally agree. i'm one of those really obnoxious slash/yaoi activists that get really irritated when the only thing people care about is smut. trust me, i was aiming to be an erotica author for a while, so i appreciate porn as much as any fangirl, but i also need plot, development, substance. Ipsuren is a plot based multichapter fic that happens to also have porn on the side. but it's not just for fapping purposes, it's also meant to give further insight into the character development and plot, because hebia is such a crucial aspect of Ipsuren lifestyle. they legit need it to survive.
i was explaining to a friend earlier that while humans have sex to reach climax, Ipsuren have sex to replenish their power and get to know one another.
also this rant was totally unnecessary. sorry ^^;
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You must know, that your fic is the fic I'm most looking forward to read to nowadays. I just can't point it out but something about the story really get me drawn. Everything about the world, your characters, the plot, applause for you ;A;
This chapter is fdjsnkjsfdgdfg mindblowing I swear I gasped a couple of times. And the smut (or a ~ritual~ XD), dies it's hot. Thank you so much for updating! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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and i'm happy that this chapter was able to bring you out of hiding! now i know :3
and i hope you continue to read and comment!
i wish i knew what to say...but this is one of those comments where i'm so excited/happy/grateful that i can't really think of anything to say except "omgsh tysfm"
♥
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but after this chapter i'm starting to think it might be a good idea...
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