Rise Apocalypse: Chapter 10

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SPOT #1

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imperfectlyevil

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[imperfectlyevil]

Hey! You're back! \:D/

/rolls

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[ipsuren]

/rolls with you

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[imperfectlyevil]

Oh shit, too much requirements, I wasn't able to read. T___T

Shit. Shit. Shit. Just because it's almost the end of this freaking school year, they're all stuffing things to us like ... ASHOEHOAHEOHAHGOE? fuck! T_T

Oh, sorry. OTL ;~;

I'm glad you updated, seriously. And Kang-In's the good guy here, right? Teuk too? (though the former is obviously bipolar, or he just really loves his son that much xD)

And ... *coughs* *coughs more* *coughs loudly* *coughs until I die* am I sensing something here? ;) /wink, wink When I first read the name, "Kyuhyun", you don't know how I jumped up and down the place.

Oh, dear, you know how I waited so long to see this guy, and now I'm waiting for more *coughs loudly, again and again*

I NEED MOAR. YOU SHOULD GIVE ME MOAR. FIGHTING! \:D/ I KNOW IT'S NOT THAT EASY TO WRITE, ESPECIALLY IF YOUR STORIES ARE LIKE THIS. I'LL ALWAYS BE HERE SUPPORING YOU, KAY? ;)

Good luck, bb :D

SPOT #2

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choiminholover

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Okay! I'll make sure to spot you again this week ♥
I'm SO HAPPY to have you back...I missed you ;_;
Also, he's doing okay now! Thanks for showing concern ♥

[blahblahblah92]

Hello,
I don't comment enough mostly because I usually don't have time to read through the chapters fully, and end up skim reading, but I always save this on my laptop to read carefully later.
I love the story so far, it's so original and well thought out, and your hard work shows through each word and paragraph.
This just takes me to their parallel universe and it's so interesting to read and find out more about this world you'e created as you go along.
I hope you keep writing, and I promise to comment better when I have time.
LOVE your writing <3

[ipsuren]

Thank you for commenting!!
Even if you have a hard time finding time to read everything, that's okay! We all have lives with jobs and educational pursuits, so it's completely understandable that my lil ol' fic might not be the #1 thing on your To Do List.
You can comment as late as you want, a comment is a comment, regardless of whether or not it comes ten seconds or ten weeks after an update!

Thank you for your kind words and consideration, it really means a lot. I'm glad that you find it easy to slip into this world I've created...sometimes I fear it might be hard for my readers.

Once again, thanks a lot and I will look forward to hearing more from you in the future!

I'm About to Blow this Shit Up (Part One)

[anonymous]

Okay, so first of all, I have to admit how much I love this story. Since you've been MIA for what felt like a millennia, I even tried to read the book that you said this story is based off of. I’m not lying! I looked it up, read some of it, and was disappointed! Why is it so different?! Really! Just, your setting is so cool and I kept wishing I were reading your story and it just left me wanting! Ugh

Re: I'm About to Blow this Shit Up (Part One)

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Yeah, even though the plot and concept is based off of Wraeththu, I've tried to really make this fanfic my own so that it's not a carbon copy of the source material. That would be too easy and not nearly as much fun. Not only that, I feel like even though Storm Constantine's ideas were genius, her execution was really the weakest part of her books. The best part of the Wraeththu series wasn't the writing, which could be melodramatic and pretentious more often than not, but the ideas and topics she brings to question. The most important question, imo, that I really try to discuss in this fic: Can a society really succeed without love and would it even be possible to totally erase the emotion altogether

I'm About to Blow this Shit Up (Part Two)

[anonymous]

Then there was the second-guessing you worked in with such finesse. I’m ooh-ing and ah-ing over Eunhyuk and Donghae giggling, just looking at eachother, and Donghae thinks, “Why am I smiling again?” and he immediately knows it’s because of Hyuk but almost as suddenly dismissed that idea like it’s an impossibility. That was so genuine, like this (I won’t say love) attachment he feels towards Eunhyuk can’t be as strong or as deep as his feelings may suggest because well that’d just be crazy! I don’t know. I’m impressed

Re: I'm About to Blow this Shit Up (Part Two)

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Oh.
My.
God.

I can't even think thoughts right now because your comments have just like, broken my brain. Seriously you are the nicest person ever and I just want to baste you in sugar, cover you in whipped cream and eat you for dessert. there are so many things i want to say in response to the things you noticed and brought up, but I have to get ready for work.

So! I will respond to this later. And it will be long. My God, my comment section is going to be destroyed. but oh well idgaf XD

Re: I'm About to Blow this Shit Up (Part Two)

[ipsuren]

Ahhh and here you have touched on the entire core and heart of this book. Actually, I put that part in because at the time there were all those gifs on tumblr of Hyuk getting all flustered at Hae calling him attractive and I love it when Hyuk gets flustered, it's one of the cutest, sweetest things ever. Thus, I inserted that part into this chapter, because I think it's a good display of affection on both of their parts, that they can take ten seconds out of a hectic situation to blush like schoolboys and just...idk, feel this...whatever it is...between them. Then, after it's over, it's like, "did that really happen?" So, there's still a lot of denial and a lot of mysticism surrounding certain aspects of affection and relationships

Re: I'm About to Blow this Shit Up (Part Two)

[anonymous]

Pssh, I am absolutely no Kyumin shipper ...YET. That, my friend, is most definitely all up to you but I think you're more than capable of making me get into it within the plot and characterizations of your story