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beanova_ March 16 2012, 18:45:45 UTC
guh

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beanova_ March 16 2012, 18:47:08 UTC
^ that is the sound I make because I'm just so utterly pleased with everything in this chapter but have no idea what to say and if I could treat you to a luxurious dinner right now I would and just let me repeat myself a few times to spam your inbox

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beanova_ March 16 2012, 18:48:20 UTC
guh

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beanova_ March 16 2012, 18:49:04 UTC
guhhh

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*squeals* marshmaru March 16 2012, 19:25:40 UTC
i'll come back to properly comment 'k? <3

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ipsuren March 16 2012, 19:30:47 UTC
you better D

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i'm gonna <3 marshmaru March 16 2012, 20:12:31 UTC
Okay awwww, Hyuk talking to a cow. I find that adorable <3

Ahaha seductive Hae, you know how that affects Hyuk and us readers you know you're completely irresistable when you're like that XD

“Hyuk,” he was whimpering and he wasn’t even high anymore, just touched out, but he still felt crazy just feeling Hyuk’s body beneath his fingers. “Its been so long.”
“We did it last night!”

Ohmygod lol so desperate xD and psssh, sure you forgot...

"You’re supposed to be the rational one, remember?”

Really Hyuk? Really? I'm pretty sure anything rational was thrown out the window when you're around X) I mean I would - ahem, never mind..

AND OMGG SUNGMIN!! YOU'RE BACK!!
And I am loving the first KyuMin interaction, even though Kyu's all 'who the hell are you?' and being a brat and stomping off <3 The way I imagined it was cute idek ( ... )

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Re: i'm gonna <3 ipsuren March 16 2012, 20:49:56 UTC
hyuk talks to aminals. what a freak.

i told you hae is a slut in this fic idek why or how that happened

YOU WOULD WHAT

LOL kyu is a brat and sungmin is a wizened old man, pretty much.

the nightmares are supposed to be scary!!
i had fun writing them though
sungmin ;_;

i'm glad you liked that line~
personally i think it reads weird but whatever

hyuk is apparently a slut too. who would have guessed.

as for who it is that asks those things, if you go back to...i think it was chapter 07? with the confrontation between hae and wook, where hae first had those visions, you'll get the answer :3


sorry this is a crap response i am really tired ;_;

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What does SPOT mean? LiveJournal is so weird. noondaynoona March 16 2012, 19:56:34 UTC
Alright! Bow chika wow-wow! Sexytime! Yes! Please forgive me for being a horndog but I’m so happy to finally get some explicit bedroom detail, I can’t even stop myself from making a fool of myself right now. But! I can justify myself! Because sex is something so integral to the existence of Ipsuren and, for Donghae and Eunhyuk specifically, sex has a much deeper meaning than maybe it should, I feel like it’s important for us to see how it goes when they’re together in that way. Also, it was hot. But I’ll get to that ( ... )

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Re: What does SPOT mean? LiveJournal is so weird. noondaynoona March 16 2012, 20:33:17 UTC
Getting back to the slaves, Eunhyuk really bothered me at the beginning of this chapter. “We’re the superior race. If we want to enslave them, we can.” Eunhyuk says this but I kind of just wanted to poke him in the eye for being a supremacist asshole. I mean, if Heechul had said that or if Jessica said it or really if anyone else had said it I would be fine…but Eunhyuk just sounds like a bigot. Sure, he’s Ipsuren and yeah, he’s got strength and a long life and abnormally good looks but that’s it. The thing that makes Ipsuren so much better is their mind, their self-control and their self-acknowledgment, but Eunhyuk has done shit in that department, he hasn’t ascended at all and he doesn’t even care to. Because of that, I don’t think Eunhyuk has earned the right to claim superiority over humans because he’s hardly better than he was when he was one. He feels entitled to his spot above the baseness of human existence but I’m not so sure he deserves it just yet. Though he is Ipsuren, he is not untouchable and I think he might realize ( ... )

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Re: What does SPOT mean? LiveJournal is so weird. ipsuren March 16 2012, 20:53:08 UTC
ah, do you have more to write? it's okay if you do, don't worry about leaving huge blocks of texts it will probably shrink to a thread eventually so it won't really matter.

besides, i know that a large portion of my readers really enjoyed reading your comments last week, so ♥

but, if you are done that's okay too, I will respond when i'm a little more awake. i just got off work and am sleepy ;_;

(also, spotting isn't so much a livejournal thing as it is a kpop thing. no other fandoms do it, at least not that i've seen. i don't really see what the point to it is in all honesty, but meh. it's hip. it's basically holding a place for someone/yourself so when you go back to comment later on you're not way in the back.)

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Re: What does SPOT mean? LiveJournal is so weird. noondaynoona March 16 2012, 21:04:16 UTC
AHAHA YOU THOUGHT I WAS DONE BUT I WASN’T. I’m so sorry haha ( ... )

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kiruka55 March 16 2012, 22:14:40 UTC
update!!! yesh!!

So I've decided to comment on every chapter from now on, even if I don't have anything smart to say and no matter how short the comment is. Cuz u deserve it gurl :D

Can't wait for Kyumin scene ( I hope there will be one) I'm not Kyumin shipper, but idk, you made their personalities very interesting, I wonder how the coversation will go.

lol I just realized you've revealed almost nothing about Kyuhyun's personality and I'm making assumptions. Anyway, he still sounds like a brat.

I'm still kind of speechless because of smut. Ending was really beautiful I was tearing up, that is, until I saw that gif. Hyukjae crying his eyes out and Donghae dropping the bottle while trying to hold him still and Yesung pinching his cheek and Siwon....I actually have no idea what's Siwon doing...still, I lol'd.

I got carried away.
Anyways, 'till the next update, byee!!! (,, ・∀・)ノ゛

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ipsuren March 17 2012, 14:42:49 UTC
Thank you so much it really means a lot!

Ah, actually the entire second book will be kyumin focused (i hope you won't mind too much, considering you don't ship them).

Kyu is totally a brat. It's Kyu.

Omg that gif is totally heartwrenching though!

Bye sweetheart see you next week ♥

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ipsuren March 17 2012, 16:31:44 UTC
I missed you too!

Thank you ;_;
Your comments mean so much, I really appreciate it.


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ipsuren March 17 2012, 17:14:44 UTC
that's okay honey at least you commented here, right?
:3

plus, you comment fairly often so you're in the clear as far as i'm concerned

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