oh im the first to comment. rock on. i greatly enjoyed your poem:) my poem writing skill level thingy is nowhere near yours jim. what a talented child you are. i will hopefully see you tomorrow when im not a "sickie" anymore:) love u jimbo!
The songs good, one thing... to be burried, cremated and born again if your burried you can't be cremated... you can flip them and they'd make sence... what ever aritsic lincense...
blake. no one cares.you always look for the bad in something. and artistic liscense totally allows that one. we may forgive you for this blake. but maybe not now.
trees trees, showing off their silver leavesmadaboutsaffronOctober 1 2003, 08:56:41 UTC
HELLOOOO JIM! All right, first off, your poem is good Jim. But what's with the tortued soul-esqueness? Be happy Jim! Happy happy Jim. Yes, I think that's right. Hey Jim, guess what. Western didn't have school today! Fo sho! There was a down power line apparently. Ha, but I'm here, partying and you're at school! Ok, so I'm still in my pajamas eating a pear, but you're at school! Don't you wish you went to Western now, eh? -Jordan Note to Jim: Before you publish that, I think you should send it through spell check. Just a suggestion!
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one thing... to be burried, cremated and born again
if your burried you can't be cremated... you can flip them and they'd make sence...
what ever aritsic lincense...
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blake. no one cares.you always look for the bad in something.
and artistic liscense totally allows that one.
we may forgive you for this blake. but maybe not now.
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so no need for me to criitique
:] see you in two hours.
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-Jordan
Note to Jim: Before you publish that, I think you should send it through spell check. Just a suggestion!
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