I wish some things could yell Read Me.

Sep 30, 2003 20:15

Time for an artsy piece of my writing ( Read more... )

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blindbusker September 30 2003, 17:35:05 UTC
Jim We've gotta record. Sometime....

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allie_bo_ballie September 30 2003, 17:37:45 UTC
oh im the first to comment. rock on. i greatly enjoyed your poem:) my poem writing skill level thingy is nowhere near yours jim. what a talented child you are. i will hopefully see you tomorrow when im not a "sickie" anymore:) love u jimbo!

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allie_bo_ballie September 30 2003, 17:39:45 UTC
FUCK! no. i thought i was the first and i felt all special..but now i dont:( damn it jon! lol. jp

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blindbusker September 30 2003, 18:19:28 UTC
Im sorry lol

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iqofafork September 30 2003, 17:40:04 UTC
Im touched. Im really glad you enjoy my work.

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nauticman September 30 2003, 18:13:55 UTC
The songs good,
one thing... to be burried, cremated and born again
if your burried you can't be cremated... you can flip them and they'd make sence...
what ever aritsic lincense...

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iqofafork September 30 2003, 18:21:34 UTC
Shut it, its not a song.

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nauticman September 30 2003, 18:55:40 UTC
it could easily be made into one...

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sparaticlove October 1 2003, 02:41:31 UTC

blake. no one cares.you always look for the bad in something.
and artistic liscense totally allows that one.
we may forgive you for this blake. but maybe not now.

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sparaticlove October 1 2003, 02:39:43 UTC
jim. you know i like it.
so no need for me to criitique
:] see you in two hours.

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trees trees, showing off their silver leaves madaboutsaffron October 1 2003, 08:56:41 UTC
HELLOOOO JIM! All right, first off, your poem is good Jim. But what's with the tortued soul-esqueness? Be happy Jim! Happy happy Jim. Yes, I think that's right. Hey Jim, guess what. Western didn't have school today! Fo sho! There was a down power line apparently. Ha, but I'm here, partying and you're at school! Ok, so I'm still in my pajamas eating a pear, but you're at school! Don't you wish you went to Western now, eh?
-Jordan
Note to Jim: Before you publish that, I think you should send it through spell check. Just a suggestion!

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