Trial and Error Fic.

[ira_luxuria]

Title: Trial and Error fic
Fandom: My Chemical Romance.
Characters: Frank Anthony Iero x Gerard Arthur Way.
Word Count: 1,005
Rating: G.
Summary: Goodbyes and awkward Hellos at the station.
Author's Notes: First time drabble writer. I appreciate any and all comments and criticism. Set in England during the 1930s-1940s. Dates and history may be

Comments

[faithfulriver26]

given the fact that peasants and riff raff spoke in mono syllables and foul words that no woman should ever hear let alone utter. Frank blinked at the awkwardly shifting man before replying in a pompous and completely horrific tone.

that, my dear, was an amazing description!! wow, i love this beginning!! and i have one major thing to say about it MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!! so yeah, i love the plot. i can definitly see this as another story that will rile me up! the social differences and the way women are treated, it will definitly work me up! and i'm looking forward to seeing how the social system actually works!! oh please continue. this looks like a great plot!

[ira_luxuria]

Lol thank you dear =]

That first table that I posted this is actually the first installment of it only the claim hasn't been accepted yet so I don't think that it'll be continuing until it does. Although I have two other claims which have been accepted, one might have an installment tonight XD

Thanking you!

[faithfulriver26]

well, i hope it gets claimed, because i like it alot, obviously :D

and i'm definitly looking forward to reading what else you might have!! i just love the way you write!!

[ira_luxuria]

Yeah me too xD

[silencing_sam]

ooh, well good (Y)

The description was great, "and enthusiastic ‘oh I’m so sorry’s" I can just imagine how it would be said.

You should consider continuing this even if it isn't accepted, I know you have a lot of others aswell, but it would be well loved on here =]

[ira_luxuria]

Lol thanks
I suppose xD