The New Boy - Fourteen + Epilogue

[ira_luxuria]

Title: The New Boy
Author: ira_luxuria
Pairing: Frank x Gerard; Bob x Ray; Mikey x Connor (OMC)
Rating: Pg 13 - R
Summary: See title
Pov: First
Dedications: For faithfulriver26 and silencing_sam for being such avid readers and all the commenters. It helps a lot

Comments

[faithfulriver26]

i literally jumped out of my seat in excitment and made some strange noise when i saw this!! i was so damn excited!! i love this story

[ira_luxuria]

Awww Sweetie!
Lol.
Mkay this may not be coherant I just woke up.
I'm sorry. I didn't mean to make you almost cry.
You know how I always say that is something that I need to put in to make the plot go on when I wrote this I didn't really have a plot to go on with I just sat here and let the words flow on to the paper I didn't even think about how it could be interpreted by another person and I'm so fucking happy that you interpreted the way you did. Why? Because if I do write a sequel everything that your comment said will be included. Feel free to come up with different situations I'd love to hear them honestly. It was hard to write in fact it was hard to read but I just felt that I needed it finished and fast. I know that sounds stupid but I couldn't continue writing it. In most stories that you see it's a happy ending but I couldn't give this one a happy ending cause fuck knows it wasn't a happy story.

Thank you Mara. I appreciate every comment you have said.

[faithfulriver26]

this was coherent, promise

[ira_luxuria]

Short commnet. But I loved the firt idea about SVU I may do that actually lol it sounds awesome and would be fun to write.

Thank you and I've enjoyed discussing it with you too.

[silencing_sam]

fuck.

You're going to be the death of me, y'know that?

It was so upsetting, and yet, so God Damned perfect that I didn't want you to end it any other way. When I clicked on it, knowing it was the end, I thought, 'I hope she doesn't follow the cliche and make them live happily ever after...'

Thank you

Excellent, as always =]

[ira_luxuria]

Lol!
Thank you.
I';m sorry to be the death of you xD
I didn't want a cliche ending there's too many of them.

[dazzling_britt]

Awww it was so damn awesome yet so damn sad.
Even though I'm a sucker for a happy ending... it was still great and it fit the overall theme of the story. They're so perfect for each other because they're so alike, which in the end, is what keeps them away. =(

Sorry, about the comment, it's my bedtime. =D

[ira_luxuria]

Lol.
Thank you.
And have fun sleeping xD

[brittany_333]

*slaps forehead and rubs eyes*
Damn was that good, I have been DYING to be able to get on to read this. It fucking made me cry my eyes out, not only was it amazing, but so well put together and perfect in everyway. I'm glad that your didn't follow the cliche and make them live happily ever after, that just wouldn't have made as good an ending.
Although I wish you wouldn't have ended it so soon, it was fun reading and I'm gonna keep checking back to others. :]

<33

[ira_luxuria]

Heh... Thanks
Because everyone wants a sequel if and when Desiderata is finished I'll be writing one xD

[brittany_333]

woo!! sequels fucking rock!
Especially when its to something this good.
*hides in corner 'til Desiderata is done*

[anonymous]

i completely forgot this was finished. so imagine my surprise when i see an epilogue was written, and had to read the entire chapter to remind myself that yes, i had in fact already read this. and it's just made me sad all over again. this was definitely one of my all time favourite fics and i don't want it to be over! :(
so i'm saying that you left the ending TOO open, so now you HAVE to write a sequel :P
..to please your desperate fans. and i know i'm not the only one..!

[anonymous]

oh i see you're writing one anyway. ok. well. ignore what i said then.

but definitely very, very happy :D

[ira_luxuria]

Lol no you're not the only one but I've got so much going on right now that I'm in over my head. But I will try to get a sequel writtne because I want to write one.