Real Person. Frank/Gerard. 008. Insomniac.

[ira_luxuria]

Title: Sleep, Sleep, Little Darling
Fandom: My Chemical Romance.
Characters: Frank Anthony Iero x Gerard Arthur Way.
Table: 4.
Prompt: 008. Insomniac.
Word Count: 792
Rating: G.
Summary: “I couldn’t sleep and the sky helps me long. Is that a problem sir?”
Author's Notes: I appreciate any and all comments and criticism. Set in England during the

Comments

[silencing_sam]

Ah man. I never know what to say when I read your stuff. I loved it, but I say that to everything you write, and I don't know if you realise how stupid I feel, because I can never tell you how much I enjoy your work. [this is me in my talkative mood =P]

Poor boys, they both want this as much as each other, but damn society isn't accepting. I'm glad it is now though. I hope they're not murdered, but knowing you and your sad endings...

lol. Sorry for like rambling =P

[ira_luxuria]

Well lol. There's like a whole other 80 something prompts left. It's gotta go up right?

Ramble all you like.

[silencing_sam]

Wow. A whole other 80 chapters to look forward too =] If you can fit them all into your story =P

Lol.

As you pointed out, I totally forgot to add my Beta mode in the first chapter...

it is a low hiss of air when he pulls away,
You need to capitalize 'it'. Or put a comma infront, instead of a full stop.

[ira_luxuria]

I'll fit 'em in even if it takes me months to do it.

Lol mkay I change it ta.

[ira_luxuria]

Three parter? I'm confuzzled.

Thanks. 47 has already been done though xD

[ira_luxuria]

I have one and a half more writte out lol xD
You don't suck.

[faithfulriver26]

“Owning you is not enough. It will never be enough. I need to have you, to feel you, to hear you, to touch you. I need you to be mine in every way possible and I won’t give in until I get it.”
i adore that line. holy fuck. that was amazing
i love stubborn little shit frank. he's so much fun!!
wow. good chapter. i loved how gerard looked up at the sky and dreamed about flying away. i do that a lot.
i love their interaction. frank completely open to gerard stepping up and acting like an equal, and then there is gerard. the voice of societie's reason. the cautionary. though if frank keeps up, gerard won't be the voice of caution for long :D
can't wait for more!

[ira_luxuria]

Heh..

Thanks and fuck I love your icon!

[faithfulriver26]

your welcome!
and thank you so much
giveyouasmirk made it for me
isn't she a doll!?

[anonymous]

Much love to you because i really love everything you write :)
and 80 more of these makes me embaressingly excited

Rachel
xox

[ira_luxuria]

Thank you xD