Fanfic: Scattered Pieces [1/1]

[irethsingollo]

A/N: Exam term is obviously a perfect time to start writing again innit. Especially when you skipped an exam today because you're a lazy ass = = No but really I swear it's because we don't have our own notes since we were gone for 4 months and our classmates' notes just suck. They're hard to read and don't make sense at times, it's always better to

Comments

[letsflywannabe]

I liked this!
Although Sungjong disliked Sungyeol initially, they ended up having sex! :D but the way you wrote it made it believable ^.^;
/looking forward to more yeoljong ~
<3

[irethsingollo]

Aww thanks a lot for reading n_n
And always glad to find fellow YeolJong shippers ㅋㅋ

[irethsingollo]

P.S. You're writing JongYu? Asdfd excuse me while I go stalk your fics, love them <333

[kasayu]

Lol to start from the end and to reply your P.P.S.: it could have been longer!! TAT (lol said old pervert lalala)
Anyway, the backgroud story was so sad, yet nice and tbh to me it really didn't read like a smut, more like an AU oneshot WITH smut scene included lol. It had so many beautiful moments. the scene with the office lady was hilarious. OTL so real-life-like x"DDD And the moment when they kissed in the club, especially this sentence: "In the way their tongues circled around, curled and explored the insides was experience or maybe maturity." idk why but I love it so much.
All in all, great job bb! I think that with a little bit of practice you could become real good, tbh... you have some nice way with words! <333

[irethsingollo]

Aww, thanks for your comment bb n_n
Lol first time actually including a smut scene in something rather than writing a complete pwp, go me :D Glad you liked it *hugs* Lol and the office stuff, that's actually how it really worked at SKKU, you could change rooms if you had serious reasons, but you had to wait like almost a month lol ide.

Haha idk I feel like such a fail but I've been writing my whole life just for fun, so I've decided I don't care that I suck x"D

[kimkai]

Haha fix ya life Sungjong, you know you've loved Yeollie from the beginning. I'm glad you finally figured it out.

[irethsingollo]

Thanks for reading bb *hugs*

haha basically what I think of Sungjong, he should stop denying his love to Yeol :P But then again maybe he's not and he's only doing that for the public so that they're not so obvious ha :D
... okay I should stop xD