Fanfic: Down the Rabbit Hole [7/7]

Apr 04, 2013 15:11

A/N: to make it clear it wasn't supposed to be rated (and it definitely wasn't supposed to turn out as JongYeol) but... *glares at sowondeul and yeolcarp* I can be glad I resisted all the ideas otherwise we'd have an mpreg here Either way the smut scene fit there in the end so x"D
... There's so much to be said about this chapter, but rather at the end I guess ( Read more... )

!fanfiction, pairing: wooyeol ♥, pairing: myungjong ♥, pairing: yeoljong ♥, pairing: woogyu ♥, fanfiction: infinite ∞

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sowondeul April 4 2013, 20:31:36 UTC
OMFG OMFG OMFOMGOMGOM I ALMOST CRIED DO YOU UNDERSTAND HOW HARD IT IS FOR ME TO CRY OVER A STORY? MOVIES NEVER MAKE ME CRY EXCEPT REALLY RARE ONES AND IVE NEVER EVER CRIED A BOOK LET ALONE A FANFICTION OMG I ALMOST CRIED AT THE END MY EYES WERE STARTING TO GET TEARY ALSKHDKLSFHFKGHL BECAUSE IT WAS HAPPY YET SAD YET REALISTIC (as in not everything is always happy and perfect at the end) BUT IT WAS STILL KINDA A HAPPY ENDING AKDHKLSFDHGKLFHG I LOVE YOU MARTINAAAAA ;AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaa;

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irethsingollo April 4 2013, 21:09:36 UTC
*passes you a tissue*
DON'T CRY OMG IT'S KINDA A HAPPY ENDING SEE, SMILE~~ *insert Sungjong's awkward smile pose*
But negl I'm feeling kinda proud I made you cry when you hardly ever do :D I on the other side cry a lot, I'm such a crybaby like Jonghyun lol xD Especially over movies and books and fics orz
I LOVE YOU MORE I CAN'T EVEN EXPRESS HOW MUCH *FLAILS*

YOU'RE MAKING ME CRY TOO SOBS

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kimkai April 5 2013, 01:08:40 UTC
WAIT WHAT WOOHYUN SELF SACRIFICE hold on love rectangle- Sunggyu is Woohyun's dad now???
;A; NOOOOOOOOOOOOO why did it have to end this way. So much got messed up and at the end of it all Sungjong doesn't remember Sungyeol and Woohyun won't remember Sunggyu and Sunggyu has no idea his child is Woohyun (probably better that way, actually. yeah. much better that way O_o)
But all together, great story- I really enjoyed it. I liked it all and I'm sad its over.

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irethsingollo April 5 2013, 12:31:58 UTC
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okay I admit that if you write it all down like this in one comment it does sounds crazy OTL
But lol yeah I felt weird about making Woohyun reincarnated as Sungkyu's son but than again - as you said - they won't know so it's not really that creepy x"D I just wanted to show they ended up together somehow (because I feel so bad for them, especially Woohyun OTL)

I'm really glad you liked it bb, THANKS SO MUCH FOR READING AND COMMENTING, I REALLY APPRECIATE IT A LOT ;A;

*imagine yourself as Hoya lol*

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kimkai April 6 2013, 00:35:55 UTC
Aw, thank you. I hope you are aware of and comfortable with the fact that I'm gonna read all your stuff and comment all over the place now.

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irethsingollo April 7 2013, 20:08:02 UTC
I LOVE YOU OKAY ಥ⌣ಥ

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toshiba19 April 5 2013, 18:35:20 UTC
omg can i just hug you??????????
i love yeoljong so much and there is like so few good stories out there and this story was just adkljf;asjdfl;jasdkljf;j liek dude omg my yeoljong feels!!!
everything about this story was so friggin cute and fluffy and also a bit angsty and heartbreaking.
but i really loved this story and thank you for writing it. i really felt sad in the last chapter like i knew something would happen and just when they were really getting happy. but ofc it wouldn't make sense for this to continue cuz he was a ghost and all. and omg jongie topping??? surprisingly i didn't find it weird here.

ahhh yeoljong!!!

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irethsingollo April 7 2013, 20:06:05 UTC
YOU CAN HUG ME IF YOU'RE READY TO GET SUFFOCATED BECAUSE I LOVE YOUUUUU *flails*
I'm so so glad you've enjoyed the story, thanks so much for reading and commenting! ;3;
and I'm always happy to meet more ppl shipping YeolJong, they are precious <3
Also hearing "cute and fluffy" when someone's talking about my fic makes me tingle tingle since I always feel like everything I write is too angst or at least bittersweet, so I'm glad it wasn't that awful haha n_n

I don't even know how did Jongie topping happen tbh x"DDD I think I wanted to do it ever since Troublemaker but it always felt weird... but I still had to xDD

here have some YeolJong for your feels ;3;

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toshiba19 April 8 2013, 03:16:23 UTC
OMG you are the admin of fyealjong??? OMGGGGGGGGGGG NOW I AM DEFINITELY HUGGING YOU!!!!

I LOVE THAT TUMBLR BLOG!!! I'M ALREADY FOLLOWING YOU OFC! seriously most of the things i get of yeoljong are from there!
and this story was cute and fluffy towards the end but it was definitely also angsty. but that's okay cuz they ended up together. at first i was afraid jongie would end up with myung cuz he was such a nice guy and yeol was gone.

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irethsingollo April 8 2013, 22:38:15 UTC
AWWWWW *hugs you back*
I always love to hear ppl like the blog because I love running it sfm ;____; There should be more YeolJong fanservice tho, I'm being bored most of the time and end up doing gif series of old things or so x"DD

I'm really glad you liked it ;3;

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kasayu April 10 2013, 22:16:02 UTC
Aww you know, I feel sorry for Woohyun the most..... I could really feel him getting so depressed because not only Sungyeol left him for Sungjongie, but also Sungkyu moved on and idk, maybe I'm catching on all the wrong details here but it just really made me sad a bit... A LOT ;;____;; I really like how his story came to an end in him being reborn in Sungkyu's family but still, i didn¨t expect I¨d feel so sorry for him in the end x"D ( ... )

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irethsingollo April 10 2013, 22:46:31 UTC
negl I felt sorry for him too and it made me like him even more OTL IT MADE ME SAD TOO WHY DO I DO IT TAT
He was on my 6th spot too.... was....and now I can't deny he climbed up two spots at least = = meaning Hoya is last poor bb what do I dooo. No really Woohyun doesn't make sense. But then I'm having Minho feelings thanks to Wonderful Day so I guess nothing makes sense lately.. they're really putting drugs into them :D

Hehe I don't even know how it happened, but somehow it seemed right since Sungjong was now the more experienced one as Sungyeol the ghost didn't remember anything so 8D

ikr even tho the end was happy, the meanwhile that I skipped must have been awful. Although Sungjong at least had Myungsoo I guess, but Sungyeol could only watch them from afar waiting ;;

Anyway, I hope you've enjoyed reading it and love your comments *hugs*
I knooow tho I miss writing SHINee too but YeolJong OTL Someone get me out of that couple it's not good, especially since they're so non-existent and it makes the feelings even worse sobs.

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busha69 May 11 2013, 01:46:47 UTC
Oh hello there.
I hope you enjoyed your bit prolonged life caused by my inability to access livejournal and therefore your fic as well................

Lol jk,i am not going to kill you because we would have less of nice things in this world...but my Woogyu tho...*sobs*
Anyway,i have too many feels now and i can't comment on fics to save my life but yeah,i really enjoyed it A LOT.If i didn't it would not give me feels.Now excuse me while i go flip things (and read Woogyu fluff fics).

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irethsingollo May 11 2013, 13:07:13 UTC
haha I knew you'd want to kill me after reading it (well you're not the only one so unfortunately I'm already dead to be killed again I'm afraid :'D)

anyway, thanks so much for reading (and commenting ;;) *hugs*
I should srsly practice writing fluff, I fail at it so so much OTL the alljong I had planned for bigbang might be a good start, I still wanna write it even if it won't be for the bigbang anymore xD


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