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iri_descent

sky-blue dreams and blood-orange ice cream (1/7)

Oct 30, 2010 17:13

title: sky-blue dreams and blood-orange ice-cream (prologue; 1/7)
rating: PG-13
word count: 1063
pairing: eventual arthur/eames
summary: Arthur dreams in muted shades of black, white and silence. Eames dreams in vivid unrelenting technicolor, uninhibited by limits of convention or plausibility.

note: um, first fic ever so I'm sorry for the ( Read more... )

arthur/eames, series: sky blue/blood orange, inception

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shoppermania October 30 2010, 09:35:10 UTC

oh, this is so beautiful! Can't wait for more ♥

iri_descent October 30 2010, 10:00:01 UTC

Really?? Oh my goodness, thank you so much!! I was so worried, thank you for the lovely comment :)

corbly October 30 2010, 15:59:03 UTC

Not to totally copy shoppermania but since those are my exact thoughts...
omg this is beautiful and I can't wait for more.
(I would never have guessed this is your first fic!)

iri_descent October 30 2010, 19:14:29 UTC

wow, you guys are too kind...thank you for commenting :D
I'll do my best to work on the next part (I'm a very slow/inefficient/disorganised when it comes to finishing things)
Thank you again, you've really made my day!

yenneffer October 31 2010, 13:13:38 UTC

Very vivid- I loved the imagining :)

And I think you have both men nailed with those colours- a clever idea, and it has me interested to see more.

Cheers, Yen

iri_descent October 31 2010, 15:27:08 UTC

Oh yay, I was concerned it was too vivid and over the top in terms of description so thank you. I'm really glad you liked it :D

vinna7 November 2 2010, 01:50:05 UTC

Um.
This is your first fic?
It's quite lovely. I like how you show hints of how Arthur and Eames will become Arthur and Eames.

iri_descent November 2 2010, 02:06:16 UTC

Haha yeah it is :)
I've been lurking around fandom for a while now but have never been motivated to write myself. Until Inception. Gah, it's taken over my brain.
Thank you for taking the time to comment, it means a lot. And thank you for picking up on those little details, I'm glad you liked them :D

orion_nightbane November 2 2010, 10:22:22 UTC

The way you write is really vivid :D It's amazing! I'd love to read more! ^_^

iri_descent November 2 2010, 16:01:37 UTC

Oh, thank you so much :) I'll do my best to finish the next part. Damn exams T.T

orion_nightbane November 3 2010, 01:53:19 UTC

T_T I feel your pain. I'm having exams atm too :( Best of luck on them! :)

iri_descent November 3 2010, 07:45:06 UTC

Why, thank you :) Good luck to you too! Don't worry, we'll make it through (hopefully, eep). Can't wait for holidays!

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