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iri_descent

rainy days and mondays (1/1)

Mar 23, 2011 12:37

title: rainy days and mondays
pairing: arthur/eames
rating: PG-13 for language
word count: 2827

notes: title from the song of the same name by The Carpenters :) De-anoning for this prompt at inception_kink

( “Good morning, Mr. Eames,” Arthur says, cool and pleasant and a little wild around the eyes. “Isn’t it a beautiful day?” )

arthur/eames, inception

Comments 34

mesmorizee March 23 2011, 16:33:38 UTC

I read this on the kink meme and liked it. And I enjoyed it even more reading it again now. It's a lovely and beautiful piece of writing. ♥

iri_descent March 24 2011, 06:51:14 UTC

Thank you. It was storming heavily the other day so I delighted in writing this instead of studying. I'm very glad you were able to get some enjoyment out of it too.
Thank you for reading this little fic for the second time and taking time to leave a comment ♥♥

laughing_lovers March 23 2011, 21:05:52 UTC

Wow, that was wonderful. And heart-wrenching. It was... yeah. Yes. Thank you for this.

iri_descent March 24 2011, 07:04:55 UTC

Not at all. In all honesty, I should be thanking you for reading and commenting. So, haha, thank you for that.
But, seriously. As must be the case with anyone, it makes me ridiculously happy to receive feedback and hear that someone out there got something out of the story. It makes sharing worthwhile :)

edit: for typo, ack.

lezzerlee March 25 2011, 01:35:09 UTC

This story is beautiful!
You've captured the characters so well in my opinion. Eames totally observant, willing to help, and still a bit of a sarcastic ass.
Arthur displaying too many emotions to really be the stoic point man.
And the mourning over Mal. I love it!

This fits perfectly into my head canon. Thank you!

iri_descent March 26 2011, 05:08:01 UTC

No way, thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment. Seriously, it made me irrationally happy for the rest of the day. I'm so pleased you thought the characterisation was all right because it's an issue that perpetually worries me.
Yay! Who doesn't love Eames-the-sarcastic-ass? My interpretation of him from the movie is that he certainly doesn't pull his punches and is a lot more brilliant than people give him credit for :)

Thank you again and I'm glad you liked it :D

atira7 April 2 2011, 00:23:12 UTC

Your writing style is so poetic. It grips me and wrenches me into the story.

iri_descent April 17 2011, 12:10:00 UTC

Oh, goodness, you are far too generous in saying that, thank you. I'm just glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for taking the time to leave a comment on all the different stories you read :)

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iri_descent May 1 2011, 02:52:23 UTC

Thank you so much. I actually think I tend to get rather carried away with description and imagery so yay, I'm terribly pleased you liked it :)