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tadmb83 November 15 2009, 00:13:23 UTC
loved this story!

“I’m sure they’ve eaten already, or at least Mark has,”

HAHAHA the torres family you created was great! this was a lot of fun to read!

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irisheyes_77 November 15 2009, 00:28:29 UTC
Hee. I was hoping someone would catch that line.

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historiennelys November 15 2009, 02:00:42 UTC
I really love the way you write Mark! ^_^

And LOL at the hickey scene ;P

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cit567 November 15 2009, 04:53:55 UTC
Gthis story is a personal fave! I loved the way you ended it!!! Screw Denver MIAMI is wayyyy better :)

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Loved it! kdmr87 December 12 2009, 21:44:05 UTC
I loved the whole story!!! I love Mallie and this story is definitely one of my favorite. Their steamy, fun, happy, dramatic journey was amazing!!! Great job with it. Hope you write more steamy Mallie!!!!!!

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