The Guardian, Chapter Three

Jan 03, 2009 11:11

            Bella lay silently in bed watching the clock slowly tick from one minute to the next.  The house was silent, Ellie had been asleep for a few hours already, and Jacob was still conspicuously absent from her side.

He was supposed to be home hours earlier, but a phone call around eight o’clock told Bella that Embry’s truck unexpectedly ( Read more... )

fan fiction, jacob/bella, twilight

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shadow1905 January 3 2009, 17:56:48 UTC
Gah! Tell me that's not the end! (I'm loving this, by the way, even though it makes me cry!)

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irishsongbird January 3 2009, 19:04:46 UTC
lol That's not the end, don't worry! I'm so glad you like it. And that it makes you cry. I don't know if I've ever made someone cry before! haha

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shadow1905 January 3 2009, 20:37:40 UTC
Oh, I'm a softie. It always gets me when Edward is left behind while Bella goes off to have a happy life with Jacob. Bluesuzanne gets me every time :) The trick is for Bella to still feel a connection to Edward. I basically started bawling when she pulled the box out of her closet.

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irishsongbird January 4 2009, 01:13:02 UTC
And to make it kind of ironic, I suppose...that little trunk that Bella keeps all of Edward's things in was made by Jacob. Hm.

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adjustmexbaby January 3 2009, 23:51:04 UTC
okay, i'm in tearssss.

bella still holding onto memories of edward. got me.
This was as always, awesome. (: <33

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irishsongbird January 4 2009, 01:13:39 UTC
Thanks! I made another one cry, whoohoo! lol

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adjustmexbaby January 4 2009, 01:39:09 UTC
as shadow1905, said i'm a softie as well. ahaha, i'm ridicoulously emotional (behind closed doors that is hahaa)

and by the wayy qt icon! mickey. :D

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modestgoddess79 January 3 2009, 23:56:23 UTC
I wish she'd read the letter although it was probably just an address.

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irishsongbird January 4 2009, 01:14:35 UTC
That it was. :)

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hardyzeli69 January 11 2009, 23:20:33 UTC
Oh My That was... *sniffs* GREAT! *goes to cry over the other chappie*

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irishsongbird January 12 2009, 01:46:44 UTC
Aw, yay! haha More crying! It makes me so excited to know people are getting emotional over this story! Thanks so much!

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hardyzeli69 January 12 2009, 19:03:07 UTC
You're Welcome? xDDDDDD!!!

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