I love this. You wrote both Clark and Lois very well and certainly gave me chills during that whole undressing scene :P You should write a sequal where they get a little farther than Lois's shirt LOL
Thank you for reviewing! Even writing semi-sexy scenes is like pulling teeth for me, so I'm happy that you liked that scene. It's so not my forte, but if it was, there would totally be a smut!sequel coming.
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I love giving people the warm fuzzies. :)
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