Comments | irishunicorn03: Part I: words and promises we couldn't keep

irishunicorn03

Part I: words and promises we couldn't keep

Jun 30, 2011 13:20

Title: words and promises we couldn't keep
Prompt: fear/castle100
Rating: PG
Fandom: Castle
Summary: There's a hole piercing her flesh.
Spoilers: Knockout
Author's Notes: Little bit poetic (maybe?) and little bit experimental. Title from Rise by The Frames. lj cut from City Lights by Paul Taneja. Also used for the darkship prompt meme, 'you're bleeding ( Read more... )

series: you will be my ain true love, pairing: castle/beckett, fandom: castle, character: richard castle, community: castle100

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musogato June 30 2011, 18:50:10 UTC

Aww. ;_;
Really nicely done!

irishunicorn03 July 3 2011, 00:00:59 UTC

Thank you!

xleste June 30 2011, 19:56:08 UTC

This IS poetic and beautiful. Thanks for sharing it!

irishunicorn03 July 3 2011, 00:01:24 UTC

Thank you! for reviewing.

mystizan July 1 2011, 01:44:49 UTC

Man oh MAN! u shouldn't be able to say so much with so few words. This was BREATHTAKING. (Castle agrees).

irishunicorn03 July 4 2011, 01:26:25 UTC

Thank you! Very sweet of you to say. :)

mystizan July 4 2011, 02:01:58 UTC

ur welcome :)

stardust_20 July 1 2011, 09:14:59 UTC

Is is truly amazing. You always say SO much with so few words and it is always so perfect. I'm in awe of your talents for writing drabbles.

♥

irishunicorn03 July 4 2011, 01:30:22 UTC

Thank you! I was grinning ear to ear after reading your review. That is very sweet of you to say, especially since it comes from an author I admire.

This may seem weird, but I like writing drabbles because it gives me more control over the s/l, in regards to what needs to be said, instead of what I want to say.

(Although, it has kinda ruined me for writing longer fics.)

:)

stardust_20 July 4 2011, 11:07:19 UTC

I know what you mean. I really enjoy exploring drabbles for that reason too. Of course I can't seem to give up writing longer fics, even though I sometimes want to. :)

irishunicorn03 July 6 2011, 22:52:36 UTC

Your long fics are brilliant. And as long as you write them, I'll read them.

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frogster_15 July 2 2011, 15:28:40 UTC

Fantastic! You put so much into so few words. Wish I had that talent.

Liked that you used all lowercase letters, it adds something to the piece (though I can't quite put my finger on what).

irishunicorn03 July 4 2011, 01:33:15 UTC

Aww! Thanks.

The lowercase case thing is something I've done within the Lost fandom, and I really liked the way it looked so I wanted to try it in this fandom as well.