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FIC: Coda (sequel to Intermezzo)

Feb 28, 2008 21:50

Author: irislock
Title: Coda
Rating: NC-17
Summary: sequel to Intermezzo
Word count: 8414
Pairing: Harry/Ginny, with mentions of past Harry/OFC, Ginny/OMC and Ginny/Luna
Warnings: explicit sexual situations, pregnancy loss, anal sex (or, as
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h/g fic

Comments 22

cacata February 29 2008, 03:58:40 UTC

You are absolutely the best person, ever! (You are also one sick puppy with that last sentence, but I love that about you :P) What a wonderful epilogue to Intermezzo. I felt so bad for Ginny and Harry. I didn't even think that it wasn't Harry's baby. How sweet was he when he jumped in the cold lake? Such a Harryish thing to do. I love the alternating voices of Harry and Ginny and I also liked her explanation of why sex with luna was different, "She'd do the same for you" :). Wonderful, wonderful story. Now I will go to bed with a big fat smile on my face.

irislock February 29 2008, 18:34:04 UTC

Thanks so much! (And I'm so glad you weren't late for work :)) I felt bad for them, too, but they have a long, very happy marriage ahead of them.

Harry jumping in the water was totally his own idea. I was writing their conversation and typed him jumping in with no planning whatsoever. It turned out to be one of my favorite parts.

I will admit to having the occasional twisted thought, but I also think part of Ginny's curiosity is genuine. Half her siblings got to Polyjuice into Harry in DH; I'm sure she would wonder what it was like, even if not in a sexual way.

Anyway, thanks again for reading and reviewing. You make writing more fun :)

cacata March 1 2008, 05:08:52 UTC

Can't decide which I like better, you posting early in the morning, so I can have a good start to my day, or you posting late at night so I could have vivid Harry/Ginny dreams ( ... )

irislock March 14 2008, 17:43:20 UTC

I liked that Harry and Ginny are even...She slept with two people, he slept with two people

Yeah, I have a weird thing about symmetry that isn't too symmetrical.

I would feel intense, battery acid type jealousy over someone else touching my man

As would I. But this is where the symmetry is helpful, I think. They were both with other people, and Ginny has the satisfaction of knowing that Harry chose her. Also, distance is helpful. As far as Ginny knows, this other woman is thousands of miles away and Harry will never see her again.

I loved how once Harry has committed himself to marriage with Ginny he is completely wholehearted with it.

Thanks! He was such a clot-head for much of Intermezzo, I wanted to make it clear that he was done having second thoughts about marriage.

I wondered if he had called out Ginny's name during sex and vice versa..

Well, he almost did with Daphne. But the thing about the names was mostly to make them focus on each other. Ginny had mentioned Audrey and Ron and Hermione after they got into the ( ... )

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shocolate February 29 2008, 23:48:14 UTC

Hermione said when she and Ron -

*skips happily*

irislock March 1 2008, 00:26:37 UTC

Hee! Yes, Hermione and Ron are very happy....

faithwood March 12 2008, 12:05:39 UTC

Just saw this in the newsletter. I am SO late!

This was so sad but so sweet. I like that Ginny and Harry were a little awkward with each other, because that makes so much sense after their break up.

Also, I was recently traumatized on AFF.Net with a really BAD Harry-and-Ginny-have-anal-sex story. So this helped me heal some wounds! :D

I am very pleased this turned out to be a sequel instead of an epilogue. :D Nice work!

irislock March 14 2008, 17:48:13 UTC

I am SO late

Not nearly as late as I am - I've had 3 of your stories bookmarked to read for two weeks now....I'm hoping for a little free time this weekend while my husband is out of town.

I was recently traumatized on AFF.Net with a really BAD Harry-and-Ginny-have-anal-sex story

Oh, dear. You know, that is one reason I stay away from FF.net. There is some good stuff there to be sure, but also LOTS of bad stuff.

Thanks for the review - I'm so glad that you enjoyed this!

cacata June 25 2008, 03:01:16 UTC

"My feet are as cold now as I can ever remember them being, and I still want to marry you. I can't wait to marry you."

"Oh, Harry, you daft thing. I do love you." She pushed on his chest lightly and slid into the water in front of him.

I still LOVE that line. Just rereading my favorite fic again...

irislock July 4 2008, 17:57:57 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad that you still like it.

chy_tea October 23 2008, 03:23:06 UTC

GAR! I've totally read you on SimplyUndeniable. You're an awesome reader. Friendship? Yesh?

irislock January 14 2009, 13:41:44 UTC

Thanks so much! I haven't been on LJ much lately, but I do have a couple of stories planned for this year. (And sorry about the late reply.)