Paradox Lost: Part 10

[irizcrystali]

And now comes the tendrils of things to complicate Luke's mission even further once he finally makes it to the right time. Keep  a sharp eye out and you'll spot the beginnings of the answer to this massive puzzle.

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Paradox Lost
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Hershel returned from school, taking a path that gave him wide berth around the fountain, then

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[irizcrystali]

=D

Working on the next part as soon as I get back from work. Glad you're loving it, and that it's helping you get through a rough spot! That line nearly made me cry, and I wrote it!

Good luck on your exams!

[irizcrystali]

Oh, you recognized me?! lol, I set up this account as a disguise, but I guess it wasn't very good. Yes, I still work on the Colosseum fics, and I'm on the final one, sadly enough. I'm ending the fandom with Union of Souls. It's been fun, but I want to move into new fandoms, like this one!

[ariante]

Woah, this is so amazing good and addicting! I LOVE LOVE LOVE when Luke talks to sleeping Layton. It has such a lovely bittersweet feeling to it - a feeling I think the rest of the story will contain. I love the path it seems to be headed down, despite the inevitable sadness. (Maybe?)

Don Paulo certainly makes things more complicated - but fun, in a way! I think I may have a guess as to what's going on...

[irizcrystali]

Oooh. Yeah, as much fun as it is to write this story, there is a sadness to it all. And if you have a guess, post a theory. Then I can see if my writing is leading you the right way or setting you up for another twist. Much fun!