Paradox Lost: Part 12

[irizcrystali]

I've seen like 4 pieces of fanart regarding this fic and I feel so loved! Pumping out chapters is easier now that I know short chapters let me release them faster. I should do that with my other fics from now on.

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Paradox Lost
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"No."

The answer came bluntly and tonelessly. Hershel tilted his head and set his arms akimbo, a

Comments

[ariante]

Lovely work! You sure are writing these at breakneck speed!! (Which is a wonderful thing, as I am pretty addicted)

Nice touch with little Hershel's haircut! The last line was really nice...and I confess, it made me think of Layton/Luke. (Worry not, I am no fangirl, ahah)