Comments | irizcrystali: Paradox Lost: Part 17

irizcrystali

Paradox Lost: Part 17

Jun 20, 2008 01:24

Phew, between RPing with the Layton group at Tegaki, work, and many headaches, I finally got this next part done! The countdown to the end has started and nothing's gonna stop the forces of Luke and Don Paolo from making one future or another the one true timeline! Edit: I forgot that the bathroom and the Professor's office were both on the first ( Read more... )

layton, luke, professor layton

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o8_pursuer_8o June 20 2008, 09:16:07 UTC

*Reappears out of nowhere*

Oh my goodness... between your characterization of the slightly 'altered' Professor Layton, as well as the mystery behind how Future!Luke's intentions are going to work, I keep getting drawn back to this fiction. I'm especially interested in how you showed the Younger Luke's reaction to his future, or at least his worrying about it...

Hm... I'm interested in the reasons how and why the hands of the Time-Binder move... but I'm not gonna theorize here and now. I'll just wait and see, huh? ^.~

Fabulous job, as always. :D

irizcrystali June 20 2008, 13:57:35 UTC

EEK! You're back! *hugs* I was so worried about you! You just kinda disappeared and I freaked! Glad to have you back now!

o8_pursuer_8o June 20 2008, 14:04:39 UTC

Teh-heh - I was up to my neck in schoolwork... and since our winter break is coming in a week or so, I have loads more time to be on here. So, yeah. ^^;

Eh? I didn't mean to freak you out! o.o; I'm sorry for not saying anything, but please don't worry! I vanish occasionally on the net all the time... It's a bad habit. XD

irizcrystali June 20 2008, 14:19:04 UTC

Ah... okay then. ^o^ still glad to have you back tho

chibi_checkers June 21 2008, 00:39:48 UTC

DDDDDD': you always make your stories so beautiful, that I start to freakin' cry. OMFGILUVITSOMUCH ; O ;!!!!

irizcrystali June 21 2008, 01:11:29 UTC

O.O

oh, thanks! i guess the crying's a good thing? a lot of work went into the fic, not just from me but from my friend Aren (who inspired the story) and my husband (who beta-edits for me) so I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

chibi_checkers June 22 2008, 22:30:00 UTC

Lol I know, I'm Dumb Slugger from Tegaki :3

gawd I love this so much...

irizcrystali June 23 2008, 00:09:35 UTC

Weeeh! Now I can place a name to you! *hug*

chibi_checkers June 25 2008, 00:15:25 UTC

*DOUBLEHUG* :3 moooooooooar Pl~

ptps July 21 2008, 08:06:38 UTC

OLDER LAYTON AND YOUNGER LAYTON INTERACTION

FOR THE WIN