Paradox Lost: Part 23

Sep 02, 2008 19:35

After much struggling and wanting to murder the gang, it's finally done! Here goes the chapter that will lead us to the Fourth Hour!

Part 23 )

luke, professor layton

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quandtuniverse September 3 2008, 03:46:35 UTC
Yay! New chapter!

Lots of flashbacking in this one :o But I think it's good that we get some insight in to who the characters are, as the story currently stands.

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ariante September 4 2008, 00:05:36 UTC
Oh my this was ABSOLUTELY worth the wait in EVERY WAY. This was such a wonderful chapter - I LOVED all the flashbacks - it seems the pieces of the puzzle (at least parts) are starting to come together more, and I think I'm finally starting to see where Corrupt Luke fits into all of this. I loved all of your little canon nods, and sometimes they were really heart-wrenching.

For some reason, when Penford told the Professor he would only alter one little thing and that he probably would not even notice it, my heart completely broke. It probably had something to do with the fact that Luke will cease to exist if he saves the professor (glad you finally confirmed this :D ( ... )

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irizcrystali September 4 2008, 01:57:28 UTC
Aww, you felt bad for Penford when he said that? T-T So tragic, that kid....

And yes, Paolo needed the DNA to unlock a special function on the Time-Binder, the one that Luke had sealed on his because of what happened to Gizmo.

Paolo's interest in Luke was more for the fact that he is his mother's son, Laura Penford's only child. He's the last link to her. Corrupt Luke only amped up his desire to get him by revealing that he would be the one to develop time travel technology successfully.

Well, off to work on PL 24, thanks for waiting and glad you enjoyed PL 23!

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