Raevyn, are you going to steal first comment on every chapter? Eh, most likely, since I'm the only teenager reading this up before noon. It doesn't matter that I'm the co-author, does it?
There you have it folks! The burning question of the hour has been answered. Now we're going off to get coffee because its too damn early to be awake.
FRRAAAAANKKKK! :rolls around in the fic like a cat in warm laundry:
Sheets? He was in a bed? A real bed with a mattress? Shit, this was worse than he thought. ♥ I love lines like this, where comforts usually mean big trouble. And Frank's little thoughts to himself, eeeee. :makes dolphin noises:
Fraaaank. Frank and his showers! Heee and awesome. :spazzes about like a spazzy thing: (srsly tho, how does Poison stay so pale in a desert? he must be magic or something) I like the description of Party Poison - the Fabulous Killjoys do look rather ridiculous, but they're so fantastic and awesome and the contrast just makes it that much more...something. IDK, this fandom makes me so excited I forget my english. XP
KOBRA KID! Heeee, I must repeat, I love Frank's thoughts on the Killjoys. :draws hearts for you the size of the MOON!: Ahhh, and the snark and Mikey getting all pissy ahahaha ILUUUUU!
He did like blackmailing people- it always made for good fun.Vicious little Frank I think is my favorite of all possible Franks
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I think you're my favorite reviewer ever. Seriously hun. I've never run into someone so enthusiastic.
Thank you for the moon-sized heartage. I will also make sure we incorporate your cat in warm laundry simile because its too frickin' awesome. I wish i'd thought of it first.
Oh and G uses sunscreen. They all do. Mega SPF 30,000. We just haven't mentioned it yet.
Like I've said, Killjoys'verse reduces me to squeeing like nothing every has before. XD Plus I've been hungering for some great fic, I'm convinced there should be so much more fic than I've found. All the fic in the WORLD should be Killjoys fic is how I'm feeling right now. XD
i love the language in this... it's so... frickin' awesome. Like... i don't know why, it just is. it sounds cool, and you guys did a wonderful job with making it seem like it really is 2019. =D can't wait for more - i'm lovin this killjoy fic. and i don't normally like killjoy fics. ^.^
case in point about the language: " “Listen, we’ll get you some different rags later, yeah? I know just the guy to go to,” Poison said after a minute. He sat back and surveyed his work before nodding and screwing the lid shut on the jar of salve. “Get some z’s, will ya? You’re gonna need to be super charged tomorrow. We’re taking you out running.” "
You could just feel the crackle of electricity as Frank and Kid had their little face off. When Party Poison says his name to Frank for the first time, I could just see his crooked smile and shift of his legs. They way you write the visuals for this story is stunning. I love the little "note to self" snippets; I can actually see Frank doing this in real life! I love what you're doing, and you both are very talented. I can't wait for more!
You have no idea how much you just made our nights! No lie. We're sitting in our GDocs chat box giggling to each other about how good this makes us feel. Thank you a million times over. Brace yourself for more good times in the future.
I didn't comment on the last one but I'm commenting on this one. Loving the way you're writing it, the language, the gritty feel of it all. The descriptions of Gee and Mikey, pff, they're so ridiculous and I love how you've pointed that out.
Also, can I mention my huge nerdy love for how you guys wrote Scarecrows as being the level 2 to the Dracs level 1 security? I love that, just love it.
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Raevyn, are you going to steal first comment on every chapter?
Eh, most likely, since I'm the only teenager reading this up before noon. It doesn't matter that I'm the co-author, does it?
There you have it folks! The burning question of the hour has been answered. Now we're going off to get coffee because its too damn early to be awake.
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Sheets? He was in a bed? A real bed with a mattress? Shit, this was worse than he thought.
♥ I love lines like this, where comforts usually mean big trouble. And Frank's little thoughts to himself, eeeee. :makes dolphin noises:
Fraaaank. Frank and his showers! Heee and awesome. :spazzes about like a spazzy thing: (srsly tho, how does Poison stay so pale in a desert? he must be magic or something) I like the description of Party Poison - the Fabulous Killjoys do look rather ridiculous, but they're so fantastic and awesome and the contrast just makes it that much more...something. IDK, this fandom makes me so excited I forget my english. XP
KOBRA KID! Heeee, I must repeat, I love Frank's thoughts on the Killjoys. :draws hearts for you the size of the MOON!: Ahhh, and the snark and Mikey getting all pissy ahahaha ILUUUUU!
He did like blackmailing people- it always made for good fun.Vicious little Frank I think is my favorite of all possible Franks ( ... )
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Thank you for the moon-sized heartage. I will also make sure we incorporate your cat in warm laundry simile because its too frickin' awesome. I wish i'd thought of it first.
Oh and G uses sunscreen. They all do. Mega SPF 30,000. We just haven't mentioned it yet.
We'll keep you posted.
Love and Muffins,
Sam & Rae
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lol, the simile isn't mine either (tho I and my family's cats do enjoy nestling in warm laundry), that was this little ficlet here: http://community.livejournal.com/mychemicalslash/2709186.html XD
Oh, sunscreen, of course. XP I'm trying to plot out a fic of my own and I came up with my own explanation, but yours is much simpler, lol.
:sits and purrs in the awesomeness of your fic:
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can't wait for more - i'm lovin this killjoy fic. and i don't normally like killjoy fics. ^.^
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" “Listen, we’ll get you some different rags later, yeah? I know just the guy to go to,” Poison said after a minute. He sat back and surveyed his work before nodding and screwing the lid shut on the jar of salve. “Get some z’s, will ya? You’re gonna need to be super charged tomorrow. We’re taking you out running.” "
gah! i love it!
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Again, thank you for reading. It means the world to us!
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I'm a little late, but here I am!
HOLY BATTLE OF THE WILLS BATMAN.
You could just feel the crackle of electricity as Frank and Kid had their little face off. When Party Poison says his name to Frank for the first time, I could just see his crooked smile and shift of his legs. They way you write the visuals for this story is stunning. I love the little "note to self" snippets; I can actually see Frank doing this in real life!
I love what you're doing, and you both are very talented. I can't wait for more!
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You have no idea how much you just made our nights! No lie. We're sitting in our GDocs chat box giggling to each other about how good this makes us feel. Thank you a million times over. Brace yourself for more good times in the future.
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I'm glad I made you both smile on Christmas day. XD
I'm totally braced and ready to burn rubber!
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Glad you're enjoying it, more soon. Probably Monday. ;)
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Also, can I mention my huge nerdy love for how you guys wrote Scarecrows as being the level 2 to the Dracs level 1 security? I love that, just love it.
this fic kicks so much ass, agh.
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Ahem. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. <3
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I am seriously looking forward to your updates.
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