Fic: Turn Up the Fakes and Lies

[iron_fist123]

 Title: Turn Up the Fakes and Lies
Author: iron_fist123  and vinvy 
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: R (for language)
Word Count: 3493
Summary: Holy shit, he does have a soul.
Warnings: More bunny food, profanity, messy hair dye, belated christmas, ratty couches.
Disclaimer:  We take no responsibility for the following side effects: fangirling, squeeing, excessive joy,

Comments

[defect_no9]

Alright, scene 3!!! How adorable? SUPER FUCKING ADORABLE! That kiss was a perfect first kiss, I can just see Poison's "devil may care" face. Kobra! You are still an ass, but I feel for your trauma! Ray is cooking, which is awesome. Grace survives! Yay!

I love that the mask and flasher are Frank's Christmas presents, like celebrating a holiday is another way of rebelling against the apathy of BLI. I'm very intrigued by Grace's condition and how it may affect the people around her. I can't wait for the development of Frank and Gerard's relationship into something deeper. What else is a better way to rebell against neutral, medicated feelings? Having LOTS of different feelings.

As always, waiting patiently (sort of lol) for the next chapter!

[vinvy]

I know I'm responding to your comments out of order but what can i say? I'm a rebel. X3

Wow I am so so so happy that you are enjoying this.

[6_pack_apathy]

So a couple of people reading my fic suggested I check yours out. At first I was hesitant because I don't want to rip off anything but decided to go for it because it's been a while since I've read some good fics.

Your story is absolutely fantastic! It really is a great read. I'm hooked now and can't wait for another update. I love how bizarre your Gerard is... I mean most people write him as an oddball but I feel like this is a different brand of weird - possibly because he is trusted with a lethal weapon. Oh, and Kobra Kid is my absolute favorite, he seems like he's going to have some awesome backstory and I love me some backstory <3

[vinvy]

Oh there is SO much backstory on those two its not even funny.

You think G is bizarre? That rocks! How is he odd though? As one of the writer's I'm not seeing it so I'm curious to know what you've got to say about it.

[6_pack_apathy]

When I wrote my comment I had just read everything from the beginning up until now and I think I was still very hung up on the first impression of Gerard with a very still and serious face and very quiet... I guess unnerving is more the right word. Gerard is usually so depressed or flamboyant or confused... He never really seems the part of a leader or at least not a responsible one and yet that was kind of the impression I got off of him

[vinvy]

Oh don't fret. I love the rambling. Its very nice to hear someone else's take on how we've characterized Poison. With him we were trying to create a very mercurial person and it seems we've done that. I'm very glad to know that we're successful.

You come across as being very articulate, actually. At the very least you can read characters well and you know what you're saying when you say it. (Its amazing how many people don't! XD) Thank you for the feedback- its delicious and it makes me greedy for more. If you ever feel the need to go on about characterization again please feel free to. lol

<3
Vinvy

[red_ones_fly]

I love this story, I'm always bouncing in my chair with excitment as I load up the new chapter haha
Awwww Kobra's got a soft side, the scene with him and Grace was just adorable. Especially with it including Santa
It seems me and Poison have something in common, I'm also that enthusiastic when it comes to christmas morning haha
Can't wait for the next chapter :D

[vinvy]

Yay! You can connect to one of our charaters! That is incredibly good to hear.

Yes, yes, Kobra does have a soul. When that scene popped into my brain I thought the world would end becasue it was so sweet.

[frankierosgirl]

this is beautiful, just beautiful. i really loved the ending. more soon? :D

[vinvy]

Thank you!

[sagepiee]

ahh! i just adore this story! its wonderful. you have such talent. :) keep up the great work! i cant wait to read more. :)

[vinvy]

Thanks so much!!