Comments | ironic_sauce: New Fic: Once upon a Halloween, NC17

ironic_sauce

New Fic: Once upon a Halloween, NC17

Nov 12, 2010 06:14

Title: Once upon a Halloween
Rating: M
Disclaimer: I do not own House, Cuddy however owns his ass.
(Thanks to the awesome tuckp3 for the beta read)
A/N: Very late Halloween fic, but better 12 days too late than never, right ( Read more... )

rated: nc17, !fic:oneshot

Comments 13

akemi16 November 12 2010, 19:07:14 UTC

oh love it!! :D
(and yes, 12 days late is better than never, soooo glad u posted :D)

ironic_sauce November 13 2010, 02:04:18 UTC

Thank you! so glad you read and like :D

jiraiyasgirl November 12 2010, 20:14:13 UTC

Oh I love this!!! Smut and sentimentality all rolled into one!!!

This last bit killed me though:

"But she was also about seventy percent certain that he wouldn't really share it with anyone, let alone hand it to porn makers. Somewhere underneath all the layers of this obnoxious, incorrigible, self-destructing teenager, she'd once glimpsed a romantic guy who was broken and beaten by life into hiding that particular fact.

House simply wanted a reminder of her, of their little stolen time together.

Cuddy looked down at him still sprawled on the floor, his shirt open, expression guardedly hopeful, he appeared to be afraid of smiling, wary of allowing his contentment to show, even after the awkward if enjoyable time they’d just shared."

That was just beautiful and it litterally made me ache for House from it's poingency. BRAVO!!!

ironic_sauce November 13 2010, 02:08:11 UTC

Thank you very much for the nice words!

I felt slightly guilty about taking such a hilarious concept like 'House and a picture of Cuddy as a Disney princess' and making it into an emotional experience for the poor guy, but well, these things happen..we have no control over them ;)

Thank you again :D

brilhar November 13 2010, 02:49:10 UTC

i loved it soooo much !!

i love how u make it.. idk, very real. like, there's sex, & affection, & all , but somehow it all is very life like.. i don't mean just being in character, but the overall feeling too :D

♥

ironic_sauce November 13 2010, 04:54:14 UTC

Wow! Thank you :D
I am glad you think I gave them enough realism, it's never easy with these two, being that hot and complicated and all!

crumpled_up November 13 2010, 09:00:27 UTC

Oooh. Nice take on the whole Disney princess thing. I like that it was bittersweet, that there wasn't a happy ending. And oh, the awkwardness! That was awesome. And hot. But really, I loved the ending the most. Vulnerable!House and Cuddy letting him capture the moment. Very nice. :D

ironic_sauce November 13 2010, 12:20:14 UTC

Aww. thank you very much. that is such a nice feedback!

Our ship is perfect in how dysfunctional they are, so am glad the awkwardness worked out well.

thank you again for taking the time to review :)

seviyorumseni November 13 2010, 09:33:50 UTC

I lobe it,I LOBE IT. :D
This was amazing.
The ending was really emotional.Good job. :)

ironic_sauce November 13 2010, 11:48:04 UTC

Thank you! I lobe your comment! :D