coming home to new colors.

[irregular_luvr]

well, yeah, it's a new year

Comments

[ascreamingcamel]

3rd stanza sounds like a good world to be in. a rain that allows someone to taste a part of themself in a most pure state is the good kind of rain for sure. so often that is what we really want, but we rarely tilt our heads back. everyone should more often, wash the dust from the face(reference to 1st stanza ohhhhhhhhh). its weird, i think someone told me once that i like to rain on my own parade but in that case it was the bad kind of rain.

[irregular_luvr]

nice analysis, and i def took word of that reference to the 1st stanza

did you notice the writing style i started out with and how it completely changed by the end of the poem? i do that a lot.

[irregular_luvr]

remember when you wrote this? when we reviewed each other's poetry. can we go back to that? it made my heart warm. you are so precious

[neverland924]

*sigh* you know it ... -you capture it all.

[irregular_luvr]

awh becca