So, I know I'm tierd tonight and about halfway through I think I may have started glazing over a few of the more typical lines ("arm catch when slip", "smile on rainy day") but the others, ("collective stock of germs", "renouncing breath") are exemplary and kudos, Lady, you just made my heart shiver. In a good way, I think. Especially with the last line, which adds a new perspective on all the ones before it.
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